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The Economic crisis in Spain
In the first place, I'd like to say that probably, nowadays, the Spanish economy is growing, not really in an important way, but last recent numbers about growthing and employment make us think in this manner. Nevertheless, it seems that reaching the economic stability that we had a few years ago (or at least we thought that we had) is going to take a lot of time. The way of life we were used is not going to come back so easily.
And in the meantime, there are a lot of people in a living a hell: without a job, without money, without faith. That situation is really unsustainable for anyone. There is a joke circulating on the Internet that says: "10 years ago we had Steve Jobs, Johny Cash and Bob Hope. Now we have no jobs, no cash and no hope". And this sentence is only funny if you aren't unemployed. The bankruptcyof a lot of companies has brought a really dramatic picture (or situation) panorama. Entire families don't have a way to cover their basic needs such as food, clothing, heating, etc. Instead of going to the supermarket, they must visit the social welfare organizations, that are providing people with essential goods. Thanks to them, a lot of people in this country is are not starving. Furthermore, the government has left its paternal role and has abandoned too many citizens to their fortune. Public companies have closed their doors or have been sold to other companies that have fired theirs employees. It's so hard and so unbearable to see this situation.
It's a really tough situation. Your writing is very clear. I made a few word changes but tried not to change the overall structure or style.
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