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Physical attractive 'For and against' about how much is important the physical attractive. * Introduction Both, society and marketing, are always remember us the huge importance of the physical attractive. In fact, from we are teenagers to adult age the message is very clear. We need to be attractive persons and we need a great look for our friends take us in consideration. * The advantages of being attractive Obviously, being attractive person has a lot of advantages, girls and men will are jealous to you, and although it's a little bit sad, even you will have more possibilities to find more jobs. * Being attractive is not everything Despite these advantages, being attractive is not everything, in the better jobs you need to be really intelligent or people notice very quickly if you only have physical attractive and you haven't brain. You should have care with that. * In Conclusion To sum up, you really need to be aware as in the life the most important is who we are, not how attractive you are. Thanks so much for your review. It's very helpful for me.

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Physical attractiveness   (attractive - adjective / attractiveness - noun)

'For and against' (pros and cons (pros y contras) / advantages and disadvantages) about how much is important the physical attractive.

You could say - weighing the importance of physical attractiveness or pros and cons of physical attractiveness (often in English we say to "weigh the pros and cons" - this is too look at the good and bad aspects)

 

* Introduction
Both society and marketing are always remember reminding us of the huge importance of the physical attractiveness  (or you can simply say "looks"). In fact, from we are teenagers to adult age from adolescence to adulthood, the message is very clear. We need to be attractive persons people and we need to have a great look in order for our friends take us into consideration.


* The advantages of being attractive
Obviously, being attractive person has being attractive gives you a lot of advantages.  Girls and men Men and women will are jealous to of you, and even though it's a little bit sad, even you will have more (possibilities to find more jobs).  more job opportunities 


* Being attractive is not everything
Despite these advantages, being attractive is not everything.  In (better) higher level jobs you need to be really intelligent because people notice very quickly if you only have physical attractive looks and you haven't no brains. You should have care with that.   You have to be careful about that.


* In Conclusion
To sum up, you really need to be aware as that in the life the most important thing is who you are, not how attractive you are.

Thanks so much for your review.
It's very helpful for me.

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Physical attraction

'For and against' about how important is physical attractiveness.
* Introduction
Both society and marketing are always reminding us about the huge importance of physical attraction. In fact, from we are teenagers to adult age, the message is very clear: we need to be attractive and we need a great look for our friends take us seriously.
* The advantages of being attractive
Obviously, being attractive person has a lot of advantages; girls and men will be jealous of you, and although it's a little bit sad, you will even have a better chance of finding a job.
* Being attractive is not everything
Despite these advantages, being attractive is not everything; in the more demanding jobs, you need to be really intelligent, or else people will notice that you only have the looks but not the brain. You should be careful with that.
* In Conclusion
To sum up, you really need to be aware of in life is who we are, not how attractive you are.

Thanks a lot for your review.
It's very helpful to me.

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