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My favirote Amarican singer -Taylor Swift One year ago ,it 's my first time to lisiten to T alor's song "speak now",in that time I have less acknowledge to the Amarican song's style or any other things.I just thought "speak now" 's melody rythm are so pure and peaceful as later I knew Taylor is country music style so that I had a doubt that why there is no such "city music" or"town music"?Later ,with the more acquinstance increase to Talor,I am so amazed with her numorous ex-BF ,I am drunk with that .While I still love Taylor's songs.Such as enchanted ,red,blank space,sparks fly,safe and sound,Tik tok,etc.It is so ruined my mind is that I watched the Bart baker's weird MV about blank space .It is funny but not interesting! That ruined my thingking .Damn funny.

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Hi 微微! Here's my first try at correcting:

 

My favirote Amarican singer -Taylor Swift

A year ago, I heard Taylor's song "speak now" for the first time. At that time, I had little knowledge about the style or content of American songs. I just thought that the melody and rhythm of "speak now" was so pure and peaceful. I later found out that Taylor's songs are in the country music style.

Later on, I became more familiar with Taylor, and I was amazed at how many boyfriends she has had. While I still love Taylor's songs such as "enchanted," "red," "blank space," "sparks fly," "safe and sound," "tik tok," etc., I was disappointed when I watched Bart Baker's weird music video about "blank space." It was funny but not interesting at all!

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2)you got me! I just want to asking that.3)it means I knew more about Taylor with time gone.4)I am shocked when I saw you don't know what IS "MV",isn't it refers to "music vudeo"?5) you misthought it. I that mean is "the Bart Baker who changed Taylor's song "blank space" into funny one ,I think that change was ruined my felt to Taylor's song,it is just for fun but not has any other meanings! And I thought Taylor had many ex-lovers is not too bad to blame her toward to love.But still amazed me really.
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Hi! Before I correct your entry, I want to make sure I understand what you are trying to say. 1. What do you mean by "In that time I have less acknowledge to the American song's style...?" 2. Are you asking why there is no city music or town music? (That's a good question :) I will answer it later, but right now I want to focus on correction. 3. What do you mean by "with the more acquinstance increase to Taylor?" 4. What do you mean by "MV?" 5. Do you mean that finding out about Taylor's many boyfriends ruined the way you think about her? Like, it changed how you felt about her as a person? Let me know and I will help you with this entry!

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