生病了（感冒险）
大家好！你们可以纠正我的错误吗？ 我很需要帮助！(I think I was a little ambitious with this one... Much obliged for your help!)
有一天，R纳努克和D纳努克看着电视听到了一个敲门。他们懒地面面相觑，希望着其他的会走开门去。终于D纳努克强迫自己出卧榻起来过门口去看到是谁。他一看就恐怖地呐喊：“糟糕！就是鲁弗！难道我们刚刚恢复了上个冒险吗？”（他说如此因为鲁弗总是去哪里带冒险）。他们都赶快隐藏在卧榻下面，只有他们的尾巴突出。
鲁弗就进去，说对装饰：“你们的家好漂亮！很干净这个地方了。上次我甚至不能这里走步因为太乱了！”
“出去吧！”一个纳努克从卧榻下面叫道。“而且你上次让我们生病啦！”
鲁弗[什么什么什么什么]，说：“请开导我。 我怎么让你们生病？我甚至从来没有感冒了。”
(Above in the brackets should be, [Rufus reached down and pulled them out from under the sofa], but I got hopelessly lost trying to translate.)
纳努克们还他们的尾巴悬吊着倒挂投对方侧目。“他有一个非常非常重的情况下的疾病，”D纳努克说。“当他们甚至不知道有一个问题的时候，是最重的。”
“咳咳，”R 纳怒克加了。“鲁弗先生，你一定没有感冒，你只有感冒险。”
鲁弗很感兴趣：“感冒险是什么呢？”
R纳怒克继续说：“正常的豆豆娃像我们喜欢留在家一天到晚看电视。可是，当你得了感冒险的时候，你会着魔闲逛各地世界追着妖精、小龙、神奇的宝石、什么的。呃，你可以把我们放在地面了吗？”
鲁弗叹了口气，把他们放在自己的头上。《一absolutely not satisfied with that translation. Should have been something like "Rufus sighed and plopped them down on their heads."
“瞧，上次你来这里，我们也得了那个疾病。你是会传染！”
“那算了，”鲁弗说。“我以前想请你们跟我一起去追逐那个一万棒棒糖的洞穴，可是有的豆豆娃不喜欢一个好冒险。”说如此之后，他离开。他没关门口。
纳怒克们坐着那里凝视开的门。那个开的门好像叫他们的名字。
D纳怒克打喷嚏了。
“你生病了吗？”
D纳怒克点点头。
“我也生病了。咱们走啊！”
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生病了（感冒险）
大家好！你们可以纠正我的错误吗？ 我很需要帮助！(I think I was a little ambitious with this one... Much obliged for your help!)
大家好！你们可以纠正我的错误吗？ 对于你们的帮助，我很感激！
有一天，R纳努克和D纳努克看着电视听到了一个敲门。他们懒地面面相觑，希望着其他的会走开门去。终于D纳努克强迫自己出卧榻起来过门口去看到是谁。他一看就恐怖地呐喊：“糟糕！就是鲁弗！难道我们还没有度过最近的冒险吗？”（他说如此因为鲁弗总是去哪里带冒险）。他们都赶快隐藏在卧榻下面，只有他们的尾巴突出。
有一天，R纳努克和D纳努克正在看电视时，听到有敲门声，他们懒洋洋的看着对方，都希望对方去开门。最终D纳努克强迫自己从沙发上起来，缓慢的走到门口，看看是谁。他一看就恐怖地呐喊：“糟糕！就是鲁弗！难道我们刚刚恢复了上个冒险吗？”（无论鲁弗走到哪里，总会带来冒险）。他们都赶快隐藏在卧榻下面，只有他们的尾巴突出。
鲁弗就进去，说对装饰：“你们的家好漂亮！很干净这个地方了。上次我甚至不能这里走步因为太乱了！”
鲁弗自己进来，看到装修说：“你们的家好漂亮！很干净这个地方。上次我甚至不能这里走步，因为太乱了！”
“出去吧！”一个纳努克从卧榻下面叫道。“而且你上次让我们生病啦！”
“出去！”一个纳努克从卧榻下面叫道。“上次你让我们生病啦！”
鲁弗[什么什么什么什么]，说：“请开导我。 我怎么让你们生病？我甚至从来没有感冒了。”
(Above in the brackets should be, [Rufus reached down and pulled them out from under the sofa], but I got hopelessly lost trying to translate.)
鲁弗弯下腰，通过他们的尾巴把他们从沙发底下弄出来。鲁弗说“说明白，我怎么让你们生病了？我甚至从来没有感冒过。）
纳努克们还他们的尾巴悬吊着倒挂投对方侧目。“他有一个非常非常重的情况下的疾病，”D纳努克说。“当他们甚至不知道有一个问题的时候，是最重的。”
纳努克们的尾巴一直被悬空吊挂着，彼此投下长长的一瞥，“他得了一种非常非常严重的疾病”，D纳努克说."在最严重的时候，他们居然都不知道他们有问题。”
“咳咳，”R 纳怒克加了。“鲁弗先生，你一定没有感冒，你只有感冒险。”
“咳咳，”R 纳怒克加了句。“鲁弗先生，你一定没有感冒，你只是有感冒险。”
鲁弗很感兴趣：“感冒险是什么呢？”
R纳怒克继续说：“正常的豆豆娃像我们喜欢留在家一天到晚看电视。可是，当你得了感冒险的时候，你会着魔闲逛各地世界追着妖精、小龙、神奇的宝石、什么的。呃，你可以把我们放在地面了吗？”
鲁弗叹了口气，把他们放在自己的头上。《一absolutely not satisfied with that translation. Should have been something like "Rufus sighed and plopped them down on their heads."
鲁弗叹了口气，噗地一声把他们扔下，头着地。（？？？）
“瞧，上次你来这里，我们也得了那个疾病。你是会传染！”
“瞧，上次你来这里，我们也得了那个疾病。你有传染病！”
“那算了，”鲁弗说。“我以前想请你们跟我一起去追逐那个一万棒棒糖的洞穴，可是有的豆豆娃不喜欢一个好冒险。”说如此之后，他离开。他没关门口。
纳怒克们坐着那里凝视开的门。那个开的门好像叫他们的名字。
D纳怒克打喷嚏了。
“你生病了吗？”
D纳怒克点点头。
“我也生病了。咱们走啊！”
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English version (part 2):
Rufus sighed and plopped them down on their heads.
“And you see, last time you came here, we caught the disease, too. You’re contagious!”
“Well, never mind,” said Rufus. “I was going to invite you to come along on a quest to find the lost cave of ten-thousand lollipops, but some beanies just don’t appreciate a good adventure.” After saying this, he left. He didn’t shut the door.
The Nanooks sat there staring at the open door. The open door seemed to be calling their names.
D. Nanook sneezed.
“Are you sick?”
D. Nanook nodded.
“Me too. Let’s go.”
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English version (part 1):
One day, R. Nanook and D. Nanook were watching television when they heard a knock at the door. They looked at each other lazily, hoping the other would go answer the door. Finally D. Nanook forced himself out of his couch and lumbered over to the door to see who it was. One look and he shrieked in terror. “Oh no!! It’s Rufus! Haven’t we just gotten over our last adventure?” (For Rufus brought adventure with him wherever he went). They both rushed and hid under the couch with only their tails protruding.
Rufus invited himself in and remarked about the décor. “Nice place you’ve got here! Really cleaned the place up! Last time I couldn’t even walk it was so messy!”
“Go away!” called a Nanook from under the sofa. “Last time you also made us sick!”
Rufus reached down and pulled them out from under the couch by their tails. “Do enlightened me,” he said. “How did I make you sick? I’ve never even gotten a cold before.”
The Nanooks, still dangling upside-down by their tails, cast each other a side-long glance. “He has a terrible, terrible case,” said D. Nanook. “It’s always the worst when they don’t even know they have a problem.”
“A-hem,” added R. Nanook. “Rufus, sir, it’s not a cold that you have, it’s an adventure cold.” “Normal Beanies like us like to stay at home and watch television all day. But when you contract an adventure cold, you feel possessed into gallivanting around the world chasing goblins and dragons and magic jewels and stuff. Um, can you put us down, now?”
Rufus was intrigued. “And what is an adventure cold?”
R. Nanook continued, “Normal Beanies like us like to stay at home and watch television all day. But when you contract an adventure cold, you feel possessed into gallivanting around the world chasing goblins and dragons and magic jewels and stuff. Um, can you put us down, now?”
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