Compare the features of the bus and the train

Nowadays，vehicles have become the most important part of human peoples's daily life. l'd like to talk about the difference in features between buses and trains/a bus and a train.

There are 7 points which l want to discuss. The first point is noise. A train runs in a suburb, but a bus runs on downtown . You would get many a lot of noise from around people outside when you get on bus. The result is a train makes lower less noise than a bus . Second, the safety is also diffrerent . A bus runs on a road with other vehicles, and the narrow way or high speed can make accidents frequently . A train is so much more different. It's more safe than the bus. Third, speaking of convenience . The bus is not as convenient as the train . Fourth , the train is much cheaper than the bus for the long-distance .Fifth , a bus is a narrow place that doesn't makes you can't feel at home . It's less comfortable . But a train is very cool ,you can get water , go to the toilet ,and even walk. On the other hand ,you can't do anything on a bus , because it's small and crowded .Sixth, the speed is quite different .Compare the bus with the train that and everybody knows the train is pretty fast. The last point is time and route, a bus is more flexible because of it doesn't need many construction fees, we can tell from the condition .

That's my comparison , and we can tell that the train is more good better in most aspects from the previous condition .  bus.

This is good overall. Remember to use an article when talking about an object, eg. a bus, the train, go to the toilet. Also, have a look at your use of superlatives like 'lower' and 'more good'.