Gap year

In developed and other countries,many people choose to take a gap year,a year off between high school and college.I would like to discuss the pros and cons as follows.
A recurring criticism of gap year is that,if a young person has separated had time away from a study pattern for one year,they would spend a long  much time readjusting to the school lifestyle.Life is a race against from time.When they are young, time is the most worthy of treasures.Without gap year, the direct exploring  exploration of the disciplines(?) to find their path would be the right decision for young people.
A benefit to of waiting is that young adults have a chance to explore their goals,visions,and life value.Travelling and working offer a varied kind of experience,because they can acquire knowledge and basic life skills they are not familiar with.When they travel or work to in an unfamiliar environment and try to figure out problems what that they must be faced,they start learning a lot of things.But more than this,hardworking and colorful interesting travelling provides young people with a valuable insight in to adult life.Such insight often has great bearing on the future or career prospect of a young man.And unforgettable experiences of gap year offers them a much greater appreciation of the labors painstakingly of their parents.
I am an advocate for requiring “life experience” piror to enrolling in a university for because young adults often do not have the experience to make an informed decision about what they should do in life.In their“year away”,they have more time to discovery which field be chose they should choose to focus on in the future.

Well done, you write very well! :)