The Japan - I have English exercise about the Japan Country. Can you help me to fix, please? thanks!
I will start with some general infomation about the Japan:
- Reason: We’re choose Japan because the Japan is famous National in Asia about economic, technology, education,...
Morever, the Japan is national have long history and a lot of traditional culture.
- Indenpendent’s day in Japan is 11/02 every years.
- As you all know, the capital of Japan is Tokyo, a city of exspensive.
- Flag of Japan is flags has two colour red and white. White is background, it's shown for integrity, straightforward. Red circle in between is symbolize for the sun. That's reason we used to call the Japan is the country of rising sun.
- Currency of this country is JPY brass, 1 JPY, 2, 5,10, 100, 500, 1000, 2000, 5000 JPY and biggest is 10000 JPY, now it has price about 1.800.000 VND.
- The Japan has weather 4 seasons is clear, Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter. The Spring often begins from about March to May, Summer is from June to August, Fall is from September to November and Winter is from December to Jannuary.
- In Japan, the Population is very crowed, about 128 people millions and majoriti is old population to at the present.
Help me to fix, please!! :)
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The Japan - I have an English exercise to write about the Japan Country. Can you help me to fix it, please? thanks!
I will start with some general information about the Japan:
- Reason: We’ve choose chosen/been given Japan as a writing topic because the Japan is a famous National in/of Asia about for economyic, technology, education,...
Morever, the Japan is a national have with a long history and a lot of traditional culture.
- Indenpendence day in Japan is 11/02 every years.
- As you all know, the capital of Japan is Tokyo, a city of expensive to live in.
- The flag of Japan is flags has two colours - red and white. White is the background, it's shown for it symbolises integrity, directness and simplicity straightforward. The red circle in between the middle is symbolize for the sun. That's the reason we used to call the Japan is the country/land of the rising sun.
- the currency of this country is JPY brass, in denominations of 1 JPY, 2, 5,10, 100, 500, 1000, 2000, 5000 JPY and the biggest is 10000 JPY; 1JPY now it has price about 180.0 .0001.800.000 FREE VND.
- The Unlike Vietnam Japan has weather 4 distinct seasons is clear, Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter. The Spring often usually lasts begins from about March to May; Summer is from June to August, Fall is from September to November and Winter is from December to January.
- In Japan, the Population is very crowded, about 128 people millions, and majority a high percentage is old population to at the present.
Help me to fix, please!! :)
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