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More than one thing Tody I have no definite subject to write about,but I need to write just for changing. The dominant idea which I think of a lot,new suggestion for my work,who can I be creative ? What is the ideal method to motivate the other? How can you get a new ideas and seggestion from the other? Also I have a repeated fun idea,which is:how I can write English without mistakes, sometime I do but in aonther time I confuse,any way I know the only way to that is practices,but I want to link between the pronunciation and writting,I feel I near to that but there are alittle thing s I should do. The last thing which I'm thinking of now,missing one of my best friends, the worthest thing when you feel you were connced , and someone did not know what he mean for you. It's diffcult when you think how much it was painful,while the other consider it was merly mistake، and the word sorry is enough to solve evey thing. It is ironic to repeat the same question for the hunderd time,when will I learn?

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More than one thing

Today I have no definite subject to write about, but I need to write just for improving changing.

The main dominant idea that which I think of a lot,  is a new suggestion for my work.  How who can I be creative? What is the ideal method to motivate the others? How can you get a new idea ideas and suggestion seggestion from others the other?

Also, I have a repeated fun idea,which is:how I can can I write English without mistakes?,  Sometimes sometime I do but other times in aonther time I get confused, any way I know the only way to do that is practice practices, but I want to link between the pronunciation and writting,I feel I am near to that but there are little things alittle thing s I should do.

The last thing which I'm thinking of now, is missing one of my best friends.  Not really sure what you meant here.  the worthest thing when you feel you were connced, and someone did not know what he mean for  meant to you.


It's diffcult when you think how  painful it was  much it was painful,while the other considers consider it was merely a merly mistake، and the word sorry is enough to solve everything evey thing. It is ironic to repeat the same question for the hundredth hunderd time,when will I learn?

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More than one thing

Tody I have no definite subject to write about,but I need to write just for changing. a change. 

The dominant idea which I think of a lot,new suggestion for my work,who can I be creative ? The dominant idea behind my work is how to be creative.  What is the ideal method to motivate the others? How can you get a new ideas and seuggestion from the others?

Also I have a repeated fun idea, funny, repetitive idea, which is:how I can write English without mistakes?  Sometime I do,  but in aonther times I get confused.  Any way I know the only way to that is by practicing,but I want to link between the pronunciation and writing.  I feel I am getting closer near to that but there are always little things I should remember to do.

The last thing which I'm thinking of now is missing one of my best friends.  It is a terrible thing when you feel you were connected and when someone did not know what he meant to you.

It's diffcult when you think about how much it was painful it was while the other person considered it was merly mistake.  The word sorry is enough to solve everything. It is ironic to repeat the same question hundreds of times. When will I learn?

 

(Nice journal entry! I think you conveyed important messages. There are just a few spelling mistakes and verb conjucation mistakes, but those are easy to fix!)

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More than one thing

Tody I have no definite subject to write about,but I need to write just to learn.for changing. (I'm not sure what you are trying to say here)

The dominant idea which I think of a lot,new suggestion for my work,who can I be creative ? What is the ideal method to motivate the other? How can you get a new ideas and seggestion from the other?

The idea which dominates my thoughts is how can I be creative? What is the ideal method to motivate others. How can you get new ideas and suggestions from one another?


Also I have a repeated fun idea,which is:how I can write English without mistakes, sometime I do but in aonther time I confuse,any way I know the only way to that is practices,but I want to link between the pronunciation and writting,I feel I near to that but there are alittle thing s I should do.

Also, I also have another fun idea: how can I write in English without mistakes? Sometimes I do, but other times I confuse my ideas. I know that the only way to fix this is practice, but I want to form a good link between pronunciation and writing. I feel that I near that point, but there are still little things that I can do to improve upon it.


The last thing which I'm thinking of now,missing one of my best friends, the worthest thing when you feel you were connced , and someone did not know what he mean for you.

The last thing that I think about is missing one of my best friends. (I'm not sure what you are trying to say after this)


It's diffcult when you think how much it was painful,while the other consider it was merly mistake، and the word sorry is enough to solve evey thing. It is ironic to repeat the same question for the hunderd time,when will I learn?


It's difficult when you think of how painful it was, while the other person considers it was merely a mistake. The word "sorry" is enough to solve everything. It is ironic to repeat the same question for the hundredth time-when will I learn?


You definiltey have a good understanding of the English language, though this passage is very confusing. I think you rushed writing it, and the subject matter is very vague, which makes it difficult to understand. I hope my corrections helped. Good work, you are definiltey intermediate-advanced!

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