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我阿姨的狗 我阿姨的狗叫Emma。她是女的狗,七年岁。Emma很喜欢奔跑和破碎的她的玩具。我跟她一个球,她很喜欢咬和撕。找到好的玩具是很难她不可以单撕。她是很高兴看我和是很好岗哨的狗。在里面的房屋她开吠一个不熟悉的人在前面的大门。她是一个西Scotland(?)的Terrier(?)不是妨碍在冷的天气。她很爱雪和很喜欢跳里面的雪。 TRANSLATION My Aunt’s Dog My aunt’s dog is called Emma. She is a female and seven years old. Emma likes to run and to break her toys. I gave her a ball but she just loved to bite and tear it. It is hard to find a good toy for her that she cannot break easily. She is always very happy when she sees me and she is a good guard too. When she is in the house but somebody unknown is near the front gate she begins to bark. She is a West Scotland Terrier and thus is not hindered in cold weather. She even loves snow very much and likes to jump into it. I wanted to write that Emma growls when somebody is near the front gate but my dictionary don’t have this word, so I had to change it to bark. Same goes for the words Scotland and Terrier.

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我阿姨的狗

我阿姨的狗叫Emma。她是只母狗,今年七岁。(她是只七岁的母狗。)Emma很喜欢奔跑和弄坏她的玩具。我给她一个球,可(but)她只(just)喜欢咬和撕。很难她找到不容易弄坏的好玩具。她看到我总是很开心,她也是只优秀的看门犬(guard)。当她在屋子里面而有人接近大门时,她会开始叫(她总会吠个不停)。她是苏格兰西部小猎犬(苏格兰牧羊犬?I am not sure about that),不怕冷的天气。她甚至很爱雪,总喜欢跳进去。

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My Aunt’s Dog

My aunt’s dog is called Emma. She is a female and seven years old. Emma likes to run and to break her toys. I gave her a ball but she just loved to bite and tear it. It is hard to find a good toy for her that she cannot break easily. She is always very happy when she sees me and she is a good guard too. When she is in the house but somebody unknown is near the front gate she begins to bark. She is a West Scotland Terrier and thus is not hindered in cold weather. She even loves snow very much and likes to jump into it.

I wanted to write that Emma growls when somebody is near the front gate but my dictionary don’t have this word, so I had to change it to bark. Same goes for the words Scotland苏格兰 and Terrier小猎狗.

当有人靠近大门时,Emma总会低声咆哮。

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我阿姨的狗

我阿姨的狗叫Emma。她是女In Chinese, we don't use he or she to describe animals. we usually use 公or 母的狗,七年岁。Emma很喜欢四处跑和撕咬的它的玩具。我给她一个球,她很喜欢玩这个球。找到好的玩具是很难她不可以单撕要找到一个它咬不坏的玩具很难。当她看到我的时候她总是很高兴。它是一条会放哨的狗。在里面的房屋她开吠一个不熟悉的人在前面的大门当一个陌生人出现在家门口时它会汪汪叫。她是一个西Scotland(?)的Terrier(?)不是妨碍在冷的天气。她很爱雪和很喜欢在雪里跳来跳去。。

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My Aunt’s Dog

My aunt’s dog is called Emma. She is a female and seven years old. Emma likes to run and to break her toys. I gave her a ball but she just loved to bite and tear it. It is hard to find a good toy for her that she cannot break easily. She is always very happy when she sees me and she is a good guard too. When she is in the house but somebody unknown is near the front gate she begins to bark. She is a West Scotland Terrier and thus is not hindered in cold weather. She even loves snow very much and likes to jump into it.

I wanted to write that Emma growls when somebody is near the front gate but my dictionary don’t have this word, so I had to change it to bark. Same goes for the words Scotland and Terrier.

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我阿姨的狗

我阿姨的狗叫Emma。她是女的狗,七年岁。Emma很喜欢奔跑和破碎的她的玩具。我跟她一个球,她很喜欢咬和撕。找到好的玩具是很难她不可以单撕。她是很高兴看我和是很好岗哨的狗。在里面的房屋她开吠一个不熟悉的人在前面的大门。她是一个西Scotland(?)的Terrier(?)不是妨碍在冷的天气。她很爱雪和很喜欢跳里面的雪。

 

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我阿姨家的狗

我阿姨家的狗叫Emma. 它今年7岁了,是条母犬。平时,它喜欢奔跑并撕咬它的玩具。我给了它一个皮球,它很喜欢这个皮球。由于它爱撕咬玩具,所以我们很难给它找到一个合适的玩具。每当它看到我时,它总是显得很兴奋!此外,Emma 还是一条很忠实的看门狗。每当陌生人在家中或在庭院门口出现并靠近它时, 它总是会吠鸣(吠鸣书面语狗叫的意思)。 因为它是一条苏格兰梗犬(狗类的一种),所以寒冷的气候对它没有影响。甚至雪季来临时,它还会欢快的冲进雪中玩耍。



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My Aunt’s Dog

My aunt’s dog is called Emma. She is a female and seven years old. Emma likes to run and to break her toys. I gave her a ball but she just loved to bite and tear it. It is hard to find a good toy for her that she cannot break easily. She is always very happy when she sees me and she is a good guard too. When she is in the house but somebody unknown is near the front gate she begins to bark. She is a West Scotland Terrier and thus is not hindered in cold weather. She even loves snow very much and likes to jump into it.

I wanted to write that Emma growls when somebody is near the front gate but my dictionary don’t have this word, so I had to change it to bark. Same goes for the words Scotland and Terrier.

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No, to be honest I do like very big dogs. My favourites are Bernhardiner dogs from Switzerland. But I like cats very much haha. But I do not have the space and time to have an animal.
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Aha,Then she must be lovely. Do you have a dog like that? it seems that you really like little animals.I prefer to cat-like animals.

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