When i was in Manchester (1)

In june, three years ago, My colleges and i were fired from job, at the same time, i finished my first year in the university successfully. So i thought: "i don't want to spend the summer here, on the beach and doing nothing". Therefore i decided with one of my friends to go to Manchester for exploring a new life and finding a job.

We flew to Manchester, but we didn't have house there, work and neither booking in a hostel, only the baggage. We were really nervous but i think that is normal.

When the plane landed in Manchester, a new life start for us, at least for a few months, because i had to go back to Spain  to study in the university.

We knew the street of a hostel,it was near to the city center, but we had to arrive there from the airport. We were asking the employes there about how to arrive to the city center, and finally we got it.

When we arrived to the hostel, we didn't know if they had empty rooms for us and....

I'm not good enough in english to correct the not, but i'm trying to improve myself :).

When I was in Manchester (1)

In June, three years ago, my coworkers and I were all fired and I had finished my first year of university, passing all subjects. So I thought, "I don't want stay here all the summer on the beach and doing nothing." Therefore, I decided to go to Manchester with a friend for the experience, and for work too.

We took a plane to Manchester, but we didn't have house there, work, or even a reservation at a hostel. We only had our baggage. We were really nervous but I think that is normal.

When the plane landed in Manchester a new life started for us, at least for a few months, because I had to go back to Spain for to study in the university.

We knew the street of a hostel. The hostel was near of the city center but we had to get there from the airport. We were asking to the people at the airport about how to get to the city center. Finally, we got it.

When we arrived to the hostel we didn't know if they had empty rooms for us and....

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Hi Gnomo! What a good story! I am excited to hear more about your time in Manchester. As you can see above, I have corrected some of your mistakes. Words in red are my changes. Crossed words are things you don't need.

If you want any more help with your writing, please let me know!

When i was in Manchester (1)

In june, three years ago, fire me of my work, well, to me and my workmates too, and i finished my first year in the university passing all subjects. So i thought: "i don't want stay here, all the summer in the beach and doing nothing". Therefore i decided with a friend go to Manchester for the experience and for to work too.

We took a plane to Manchester, but we didn't have house there, work and neither booking in a hostel, only the baggage. We were really nervous but i thought that was normal. ;)

When the plane landed in Manchester started a new life for us, at least for a few months, because i had to go back to Spain for to study in the university.

We knew the street of a hostel,the hostel was near of the city center but we had to arrive there from the airport. We were asking to the people of the airport about how to arrive to the city center and finally we got it.

When we arrived to the hostel we didn't know if they had empty rooms for us and....

When i was in Manchester (1)

In june, three years ago, fire me of my work, well, to me and my workmates too, and i finished my first year in the university passing all subjects. So i thought: "i don't want stay here, all the summer in the beach and doing nothing". Therefore i decided with a friend go to Manchester for the experience and for to work too.

We took a plane to Manchester, but we didn't have house there, work and neither booking in a hostel, only the baggage. We were really nervous but i thout that was normal. ;)

When the plane landed in Manchester started a new life for us, at least for a few months, because i had to go back to Spain for to study in the university.

We knew the street of a hostel,the hostel was near of the city center but we had to arrive there from the airport. We were asking to the people of the airport about how to arrive to the city center and finally we got it.

When we arrived to the hostel we didn't know if they had empty rooms for us and....