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Travel to USA I travelled to USA in May 2013 and It was the first time I visited a place so far away from my home in Argentina. Previously I had visited a lot of southamerican countries, therefore this trip was quite different. I stayed in Manhattan but I visited other cities like Washington, Baltimore, Rockville, etc. I went to a wedding in a little town in Maryland that I enjoyed a lot. I loved New York the most, It is a wonderful city.

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Travel to USA

I travelled to the USA in May 2013 and It was the first time I had visited a place that was far away from my home in Argentina.
Previously I had only visited a lot of southamerican countries, therefore this trip was quite different.
I stayed in Manhattan in NYC but I visited other cities like Washington, Baltimore, Rockville, etc.
I attended to a wedding in a little town in Maryland that I enjoyed a lot. There, I met a few US citicens and I learned about some of theirs traditions. In addition, we went to a beisbol game with my boyfriend and his US friends and we had a good time as well.
The city I loved the most was New York City because of it cosmopolitan culture and it beautiful buildings and places. I also liked Washington D.C., but I rather prefer NYC considering that It is a city more diverse.

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Travel to USA

I travelled to the USA in May 2013 and It was the first time I had visited a place that was so far away from my home in Argentina.
Previously I had only visited a lot of southamerican countries, therefore this trip was quite different.
I stayed in Manhattan in NYC but I visited other cities like Washington, Baltimore, Rockville, etc. I went to a wedding in a little town in Maryland that I enjoyed a lot.
I loved New York City the most, It is a wonderful city.

 

No hay errores serios. Solo cambié cosas para que parezca un poco más fluido. Por ejemplo, Manahattan es un barrio realmente. Por eso necesita añadir "in NYC". Además, New York también es un estado así que necesita diferenciar entre la cuidad y el estado.

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Travel to USA

I travelled USA May 2013 and It was the first time ,I visited a place which was so far away from my home in Argentina.
Previously I  visited lot of southamerican countries, therefore this trip was quite different.
I stayed in Manhattan but I also visited other cities like Washington, Baltimore, Rockville, etc. I attended a  wedding in a little town by Maryland,I enjoyed a lot there.
I love New York city,It is a wonderful city.

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Travel to USA
I travelled to the USA in May 2013 and It was the first time I had visited a place that was far away from my home in Argentina.
Previously I had only visited a lot of southamerican countries, therefore this trip was quite different.
I stayed in Manhattan in NYC but I visited other cities like Washington, Baltimore, Rockville, etc.
I attended a wedding in a little town in Maryland that I enjoyed a lot. There, I met a few US citizens and I learned about some of their traditions. In addition, we went to a beisball game with my boyfriend and his US friends and we had a good time there as well.
The city I loved the most was New York City because of it cosmopolitan culture and its beautiful buildings and places. I also liked Washington D.C., but I rather prefer NYC considering that It is a more diverse city.

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