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Correct this please :) I want you to not keep in touch or be friend or whatever the fuck it called with her and people around her. I want you to respact my presence, my heart. But you did it. It seems like you ignore my presence. You forgot you've hurted me last year with those people. Why? I'm gonna be true to you.. All I ask is for the same in return but I feel like that's too much to ask for in some cases. And now youre asking me to break. If you want to leave, leave but please dont you love me.

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Correct this please :)

I want you not to not keep/stay in touch/have any contact with or be friends with her or whatever the fuck it is called with her and or with any of the people around her. I want you to respect my wishes, feelings, presence, my heart. But you did/do ('want' is present tense so it should be 'do' or else 'wanted') it anyway. It seems like you ignore my presence. You forget you've hurted hurt me last year with those people. Why?
I'm gonna be true to you. All I ask is for the same in return but I feel like that's too much to ask for in some situations cases.
And now you're asking me to break-up. If you want to leave, leave - but please don't pretend you love me.

 

Heavy stuff!  And informal speech

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