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Rain outside It's rain outside.The noise which makes by the rain wakes me up.Sitting on the bed,I feel a little sad.I wonder whether I am getting old because I start to remind of lots of the days when I was a child.As a child,there was no neighbourhood near by but a big lotus pond and a country road to my school.When I was in the middle school,we learned a lesson ‘荷塘月色 “which discribe the beautiful scenery of the lotus pond at night ,written by a famous writter,I was so pound that we have the same feeling and enjoyed the same scenery.The pond made us a lot of fun,however,it hurted us sometimes.Everytime the typhood came,the rain and the wind blown so hard that we were upset whether it brought us disaster.We were trapped at home and couldn't do anything.When we got together,I started to tell stories which made by myself and fool my sisters.At that time,our house looked like an island in the sea.We were too small to get though the flooded road.Once I was at home and the typhood came suddenly.Mom took me from school.On the way to home,I felt I was a kite,if mom didn't hold my hand tight,I might fly away.After the bad weather gone,we have to rebuilt the stuff destroyed by the strong wind,such as our bamboo fence and the farm.My grandpa would cut the tree ,fixed the fence and checked our farm's loss. Years past by,we lost the lotus pond and we lost our childhood,also,we lost the one who fixed the fence,even though we don't have the fence any more.I do always miss him. 背景音乐,你不知道的事——王力宏

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Rain outside

It's raining outside.The noise which makes by of the rain wakes me up.Sitting on the bed,I feel a little sad.I wonder whether I am getting old because I'm remembering  start to remind of lots of the days when I was a child.As a child,there was no neighbourhood near by but a big lotus pond and a country road to my school.When I was in the middle school,we learned a lesson ‘荷塘月色 “which we described the beautiful scenery of the lotus pond at night ,written by a famous writter,I was so proud that we had the same feeling and enjoyed the same scenery.The pond made gave us a lot of enjoyment fun,however,it hurt us sometimes.Everytime the typhood monsoon came,the rain and the wind blew so hard that we were upset whether in case it brought us disaster.We were trapped at home and couldn't do anything.When we got together,I started to tell stories which made by me and my sisters seem foolish and fool my sisters.At that time,our house looked like an island in the sea.We were too small to get through the flooded road.Once I was at home and the typhood monsoon came suddenly.Mom took me from school.On the way to home,I felt I was a kite,if my mom didn't hold hadn't held my hand tight,I might have flown  fly away.After the bad weather had gone,we had  have to rebuild the stuff destroyed by the strong wind,such as our bamboo fence and the farm.My grandpa would cut the tree ,fix the fence and check our farm's loss.
Years passed by,we lost the lotus pond and we lost our childhood,also,we lost the one/person who fixed the fence,even though we don't have the fence anymore.I do always miss him.
背景音乐,你不知道的事——王力宏

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