Hola everyone,

I am a university student in Tian Jin, China. I am preparing my first ielts test, I wanna go to Australia next year, so from this day I will write a some short essay here. I am so thankful that you can point out my errors. If you need anything to help with Chinese, you can also contact me.

Good job. Just remember to hit the spacebar after you use a comma.

Hola ，everyone

I am a university student in Tian Jin,China. I am preparing for my first ielts test,I wanna go to Australia next year,so from today on I will write some short essays here,I'll be so thankful if u can point out my errors. If you need anything to help,you can also contact with me.

P.S: Good lucks! 

Hola everyone!

I am a university student in Tian Jin, China. I am preparing for my first ielts test. I want to go to Australia next year. So from this day, I will write some short essay here. I am so thankful that you can point out my errors. If you need anything to help, you can also contact me.

Hola ，everyone

I am a university student in TianJin, China. I am preparing for my first ielts test, I wanna want to (never write wanna gonna - it is simply awful, lazy speech, and ielts examinerS will see it like a red rag) go to Australia next year, so from this day on I will write some short essays  here, I  am so thankful that u can point out my errors. If you need any help with China or Chinese, you can also contact me.

Hola ，everyone

I am a university student in Tian Jin,China. I am preparing my first ielts test and would like to go to Australia next year. From today, I will write some short essays to post here; I would be very grateful if you can point out my mistakes. If you need any help,you can contact me.