Some sentences I would like you to correct for me:

1- It's better you go, because it's raining a lot and you don't have an umbrella.
2- I'm really hungry and bored. Would you like to go somewhere?
3- Someday, I will go to the USA, because it's one of my dreams.
4- When I walk too much, my feet hurt. I think I have to see a doctor.
5- I don't know why, but I like rainy days. It makes me happy.
6- I hate too really [you can also say "very"] hot days. I preferer cold days.
7- In my opinion, the most important thing about learning English is to understand what they are talking saying about to you.
8- The people is are becoming more distrustful, and I think they are right.
9- I must clean my house, but I'm really lazy.
10- I like coconut so much! I think it is the best fruit ever.
11- I like cooking, but I don't like washing dishes.
12- There are some songs that change teleport you with your feelings [you could also say "mood," but you have to change "them" to "it"] to where you want themto be. I would like to compose those songs.

Some sentences I would like you correct me

1- It's better you go because it's raining a lot and you have no umbrella.
2- I'm really hungry and bored. Would you like to go somewhere?
3- Someday, I will go to the USA, because it's one of my dreams.
4-When I walk too much my feet hurts. I think I have to see a doctor.
5- I don't know why but I like raining rainy days. It makes They make me happy.
6- I hate too hot days, I preferer cold days the cold.
7- In my opinion, the most important thing about learning English is being able to understand what they are talking abou to you.
8- The People is are becoming more distrustful and I think they are right.
9-I must clean my house but I'm really too lazy.
10- I like coconut so much! I think it is the best fruit ever.
11- I like cooking but I don't like washing the dishes.
12-There are some songs that teleports you with your feelings to where you want to be. I would like to compose those songs.

Awesome job!