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I try tried to describe my cat.
My cat is the most stupid and fat cat in the world.
His name is Mimosín, and i give it gave him that name because ''Mimos'' (Cuddles?) was the only thing he wantsed in his first moments and AAALL de the time. He knows when you´re sad. And he knows how took get you´re your attention. But his manners are quite ...FRUSTATING.
He's like a person. he likes look to watch TV, sleep in bed like a person, play games like a little kid, and took take interminable ''siestas''. He don't like to eat so (that) much and which is why im questioning(?) why he is so fat. (We have another cat named Cosita (from Cossette -LesMis) in the family, but Cosita is reaaaally thin. She eats A LOT, A BILLION TIMES MORE than mimos. ) That would be the genetic XD.
And...well...if some day you have the opportunity of know to meet him, i'm ashure sure , you will adore him.
(Ay dios mi inglés apesta XD Bueno es mi primera vez intentando escribir un parrafo)
AWESOME JOB. Just watch your tenses and its perfect!
I tried to describe my cat.
My cat is the fattest, stupidest cat in the world.
His name is Mimosin and I gave him that name because "Mimos", cuddles, were the only thing he wanted in his first moments and all the time afterwards. He knows when you're sad and he knows how to get your attention. But, his manners can be quite frustrating.
He's like a person. He likes to watch TV, sleep in bed like a person, play games like a little kid, and take interminable "siestas". He doesn't like to eat that much which is why I'm questioning why he's so fat. (We have another cat named Cosita (from Cossette -LesMis) in the family, but Cosita is really thin. She eats a lot, a billion times more than Mimos. ) That's the genetics though XD.
And...well...if someday you have the opportunity to meet him, I'm sure , you will adore him.
I try to describe my cat.
My cat is the most stupid and fat cat in the world.
His name is Mimosín, and i give it him that name because ''Mimos'' (Cuddles?) was the only thing he wants wanted in that first moment and now AAALL de the time. He knows when you´re sad. And he knows how took you´re to look for attention. But his manners are quite ...FRUSTRATING.
He's like a person. he likes look to watch TV, sleep in bed like a person, play games like a little kid, and (? ->) took interminable ''siestas''. He don't doesn't like to eat so much a lot and thats why im questioning(?) why he is so fat. (We have another cat named Cosita (from Cossette -LesMis) in the family, but Cosita is reaaaally thin. She eats ALOT, A BILLION TIMES MORE than mimos. ) That would be the genetic XD.
And...well...if some day you have the opportunity of to know him, i ashure assure you, you will adore him.
(Ay dios mi inglés apesta XD Bueno es mi primera vez intentando escribir un parrafo)
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