Hi to everybody!

Hi I am Alessia and I'm from Italy but I have peruvian origins, so I speak spanish. My dream is *go to live in London one day. I fall* in love with London, its vitality and energy. I'm studying English *in these days and I would like to speak better English. Byeeee

Hi to Everybody!
Hi. I am Alessia and I'm from Italy, but originally from Peru* /but I am of Peruvian descent, so I speak Spanish. My dream is to go to live in London one day. I fell in love with London, its vitality and energy. These days I'm studying English and I would like to speak it better.

*this depends on whether you have moved from Peru during your lifetime.

*your first correction was correct : 'to go . . '

*past tense : 'fell'

*word order, and avoid repeating the word 'English'

A good effort.  I hope you realise your dream.

Hi to everybody!

Hi I am Alessia and I'm from Italy but I have peruvian origins, so I speak spanish. My drem is to go to live in London one day. I fall in love with London, its vitality and energy. I'm studying English in these days and I would like to speak better English. Byeeee

Hi to everybody!

Hi I am Alessia and I'm from Italy but I have peruvian origins, so I speak spanish. My dream is go to live in London one day. I fall in love with London, its vitality and energy. I'm studying English in these days and I would like to speak better English. Byeeee