rainbow's notebook entry: Jan 28, 2011
In such a competitive world, people can hardly live without a goal.But the goals may vary form people to people. Some people think that being rich men is the most important in their lives, while others consider the fame、status and the happieness of their families the most important.
As far as I'm concerned,I consider the success of career important in my life.I choose this as the goal in my life for three reasons. In the first place, I can earn my living with it. If I do the job better, I can get more money though my hard work. In the second place, it can enrich my life.In order to get a higher degree of my career, I should spend more time to learn the knowledge which I can catch up with the frontier of the field. In that way, I can reach my goal foot by foot. Further more, the success of career can make me feel more confident and realize the value of life. If I do a good job and be accepted by others, I’ll feel more confident in the future. And I will also be proud for making some contribution to the socity.
In all, I think the goal in our lives should be something that need our endeavor. If we work hard to reach the goal, then our lives will be more meaningful.
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rainbow's notebook entry: Jan 28, 2011
In such a competitive world, people can hardly live without a goal. But the goals may vary from people to people. Some people think that being rich men is the most important thing in their lives, while others consider the fame, the status, and the happiAs far as I'm concerned, I consider the success of career important in my life. I choose this as the goal in my life for three reasons: First, I can earn my living with it. If I do the job better, I can get more money through my hard work. Second, it can enrich my life. In order to get a higher degree of my career, I should spend more time to learn the knowledge which I can use to catch up with the frontier of the field. In that way, I can reach my goal foot by foot. Furthermore, the success of my career can make me feel more confident and realize the value of life. If I do a good job and be accepted by others, I’ll feel more confident in the future. And I will also be proud for making some contribution to the society.
In all [or In conclusion], I think the goal in our lives should be something that needs our endeavor. If we work hard to reach the goal, then our lives will be more meaningful.
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rainbow's notebook entry: Jan 28, 2011
In such a competitive world, people can hardly live without a goal.But the goals may vary form people to people. Some people think that being rich men is the most important in their lives, while others consider the fame、status and the happieness of their families the most important.As far as I'm concerned,I consider the success of career important in my life.I choose this as the goal in my life for three reasons. In the first place, I can earn my living with it. If I do the job better, I can get more money though my hard work. In the second place, it can enrich my life.In order to get a higher degree of my career, I should spend more time to learn the knowledge which I can catch up with the frontier of the field. In that way, I can reach my goal foot by foot. Further more, the success of career can make me feel more confident and realize the value of life. If I do a good job and be accepted by others, I’ll feel more confident in the future. And I will also be proud for making some contribution to the socity.
In brief, I think the goal in our lives should be something that need our endeavor. If we work hard to reach the goal, then our lives will be more meaningful.
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rainbow's notebook entry: Jan 28, 2011
In such a competitive world, people can hardly live without a goal.But the goals may vary form people to people. Some people think that being rich men is the most important in their lives, while others consider the fame、status and the happieness of their families the most important.As far as I'm concerned,I consider the success of career important in my life.I choose this as the goal in my life for three reasons. In the first place, I can earn my living with it. If I do the job better, I can get more money though my hard work. In the second place, it can enrich my life.In order to get a higher degree of my career, I should spend more time to learn the knowledge which I can catch up with the frontier of the field. In that way, I can reach my goal foot by foot. Further more, the success of career can make me feel more confident and realize the value of life. If I do a good job and be accepted by others, I’ll feel more confident in the future. And I will also be proud for making some contribution to the socity.
In all, I think the goal in our lives should be something that need our endeavor. If we work hard to reach the goal, then our lives will be more meaningful.
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