my first part-time job
im a student ,but ,i will go to find a job after 2years,because i will graduate after 2 years.
today i fond a part-time job.though its not difficulte ,and its very simple,i learned many things from it.i think i will try my best do it well.
please tell me where is wrong,thank u,hehe.
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my first part-time job
I am a student ,but ,i will go to find a job after 2years,because i will graduate after 2 years.today i fond a part-time job.though its not difficulte ,and its very simple,i learned many things from it.i think i will try my best do it well.
please tell me where is wrong,thank u,hehe.
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my first part-time job
Now,I am a student ,but ,2 years later ,i will graduate from my college,and I will find a job at that time.Today i found a part-time job.though its not difficulte ,on the contrary, it seems simple to me,i learned many things from it.i think i will try my best to do it well.please tell me where is wrong,thank u,hehe.
词组是try one's best to do sth.
前面写从学校毕业那里太重复了，英语中最避讳的就是重复
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