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Would you please let me know what I should improve? Hi there everybody! I had to make this short video summarising a presentation I did in class this semester. As I just uploaded it to YouTube I think it would be useful to know what you, native speakers, think of it. Any comments will be welcome, especially aspects I should improve or anything you want to comment on use of language, pronunciation, content... Thank you beforehand! Here's the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GsriirLkByI&feature=youtu.be

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I know you posted this months ago, but really, the presentation was very, very good. Your word choice, speech cadence and enunciation were very good - better than a gentleman I work with from Seville who has lived in America for the last 12 years! Mucho gusto! The only thing I heard that I would comment on is the use of the word, 'just' to show membership in a select group. In conversational, American English, it is much more common to use the word, 'only' rather than 'just'. The word 'just' in that context implies that you expected more, whereas the word 'only' does not. For instance: Just two people showed up to the party. Only two people showed up to the party. Both are entirely correct, but the first one will be taken as an exception - an unexpected event.
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Hey, Brenda! I think the presentation was delivered rather clearly. I can't speak to the content itself as the treatment of the subject was cursory at best! However, you probably aren't seeking feedback for the content, so I'll just say kudos for the confident and clear delivery :) Keep up the good work and good luck!
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nice presentation

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