something i want to do in the winter holiday : Jan 26, 2011
maybe i should have a better plan for my winter holiday and implement it.
1the spring festival is the best time to gain weight...god, i want to lose weight(oh no, the food mum cooks r so delicious...)
2i love dancing,join a class or practice it at home.
3get together wz old friends & meet some new ones
4 improve my English by reading a lot and writhing an essay everyday:)
5reading whatever books i'm interested in~
PS: today i'm happy 'cause i have learned many interedsting words and expressions today~the blemish in an otherwise perfect thing is that i've eaten too much but exercised too little^^
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Hi! Great overall, I think you got a good language sense. The last sentence might sound a little bit more natural if you say it like this: "The only down side of an otherwise perfect day is that...." :D The only down side of your otherwise perfect diary.
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