Introduction

Hi,

I am Vincent and I am 25 years old. I am have been on Italki since the beginning of the this year. Learning English more seriously was one of my new year's resolutions of the year. At this time, I am enjoying my subscription on Italki and I want to improve myself (while technically correct, to improve one's self generally refers to improvements to one's psyche or physical form. It would be better to say: I want to improve my English). Here are the main reasons I think it is important to learn English:

Knowing English make your life easier when you are travelling.

If you are working in business, it is really important to know this language because a lot of people know it and we could even say (I understand and there are no errors, but it would be more currant to say it can even be said) that it is the business language all over the world.

Knowing English will allow one to discover is going to be found out to yourself new friendships, new knowledge fields, etc...

You are going to be able to expand your social skills with others. You must write either:

You will be able to improve your social skills with others.

Or

You will be able to expand your social circle.

Well done! Errors are highlighted in yellow and crossed out, replacements are given in red. Stylistic changes are suggested in blue for the words in italics. Phrases in italics and highlighted in blue are grammatically correct but would not be said and must be changed to one of the options in blue.

Keep studying! You are doing great :)