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Even though I'm not feeling like writing today I'll write a short note My dog wasn't feeling good today, he was looking very ill actually, so I took him to the vet. I wasn't planing to go anywhere though - I've been feeling weak lately due to my 'poor' diet - however, it was necessary: I was suffering more than my dog by watching him suffering and I've started to feel dizzy every time his body trembled - he was shaking violently, it was awful. He's good now and so am I. :)

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      I wasn't planing to go anywhere today because I've been feeling weak due to my poor diet, but my dog wasn't feeling good and he appeared to be ill, so I brought him to the veterinarian.
     I was suffering more than my dog from watching him suffer. I felt dizzy every time he trembled — awful — he was shaking violently.
     He's better now and so am I. 

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Even though I'm not feeling like writing today I'll write a short note (Try and keep your heading a little shorter)

My dog wasn't feeling good well today., Actually, he was looking very ill actually, so I took him to the vet. I wasn't planning to go anywhere though because I've been feeling weak lately due to my 'poor' diet - however, it was necessary.: I was suffering more than my dog by watching him suffering and I've started to feel dizzy every time his body trembled, - he was shaking violently, it was awful.
He's good better now and so am I. :)

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Even though I'm not feeling like writing today I'll write a short note.

My dog wasn't feeling good today; he was looking very ill actually. So I took him to the vet. I wasn't planing to go anywhere today though - I've been feeling weak lately due to my 'poor' diet - however, it was necessary: I was suffering more than my dog by watching him suffering and I've started to feel dizzy every time his body trembled - he was shaking violently, it was awful.
He's good now and so am I. :)

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