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Please, correct my mistakes. Space war. At that moment was something bad happened. A terrible sound came to us. We were looking up. There are many monsters were flying over the forest. -Get ready your weapons! Fire! - commanded I, but commander among us was missing At that moment the time was begining to go very slowly. I felt impulses of every shot, which was making my gun. This monsters was very slow and we destroyed them without of problems.But it was strange, that we mat the flying monsters! I thought that Goomey has only human soldiers and magic! The enemy has more power, than we thought. -We need to go less than 1 miles to the Lake! Let's go to run!- cried I In a moment we ran all together. When we come to lake, the time was going slowly again! But this time it wasn't an illusion. I knew that Goomey can to make the time slowly. The spaceship was under attack. There are many more fireballs flew to it. Runing, I was falling. In front of my face was aggressive battle. One fireball approuched upon me... Next episode, which I remember and when I woke, we was in the ship, It drove us into (or on to) a nearby planet... To be continue

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Please, correct my mistakes.

 

Space War

 

At that moment was something bad happened. A terrible sound came to us. We were looking up. There are many monsters were flying over the forest.

"Get ready your weapons! Fire!" - I commanded I, but the commander among us was missing. 

At that moment the time was begining to go very slowly. I felt the impulses of every shot, which was making shot coming out of my gun. This These monsters was very slow and we destroyed them without of problems.  But it was strange, that we mat that we met  the flying monsters! I thought that Goomey has had only human soldiers and magic! The enemy has more power, than power than we thought.


"We need to go less than 1 miles mile to the lake! Let's go to run!" I cried. I


In a moment we all ran all together. When we come got to lake, the time was going slowly again! But this time it wasn't an illusion. I knew that Goomey can to could make the time go slowly. The spaceship was under attack. There are Many more(?) fireballs flew to into it. Running, I was falling. In front of my face was an aggressive battle. One fireball approached upon me...


The next episode, which thing I remember is when I woke, and we was were in the ship. It drove us into (or on to) to a nearby planet...
To be continue

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