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Journey of Xiamen I’m writing to memorize this awesome travel. About friends The first and most important part that I need to write down is my best friend, whose name is Bei. I would like to say that she is the most wonderful friend in the world.It’s especially true when you need to get some help outside,she’s denifitely the one! Besides,her friends in college are awesome as well. All of them are kind and friendly persons and I like travelling with them.What moved me most is that they have such a close and happy friendship that I couldn’t owe in my college life,never. The greatest thing we did together was trying various kinds of clothes in the fitting rooms.We went to a couple of shops such as H&M and Zara, and picked up all the clothes that we liked but dare not to wear in daily school life.Both of us carried as many as the clothes that we were interested in,then put them on and took pictures as a memento of our last few of days as teenagers.The experiences were really awesome and exciting.I was so glad that I could share those amazing moments with my best friend. About tourist attractions This city was totally burnt up.We had to stay indoors with the air conditions in the noon. At the first day, due to the lack of sleep last night and waking up early in the morning,I was tried and faint.On the Gulangyu Island,it even got worse.Screwed up by the crowded tourists,I lost the strengnth to move forward.However, I was so selfish then and paid no attention to the others.Therefore,I messed up my friends’ moods as well.When I finally realized that,I was drowned in an overwhelming guilt and had no idea about how to deal with it.But luckily, my friends were cool with this and we still got along well later.The tourist spots were definitely not as fascinating as the forgiveness and considerations that Bei and her friends delivered to me. All in all,the sunshine,the beach,and all the tourist attractions didn’t give me the deepest impression.It is you guys who have given me the most wonderful memories.I do appreciate that.Thank you very much for your time and considerations.

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Journey of Xiamen

   I’m writing to remember this awesome vacation

   The first and most important thing  that I need to write down is about my best friend, whose name is Bei. I would like to say that she is the most wonderful friend in the world. Especially when you need some help outside, she’s denifitely the one! Her friends in college are awesome as well. All of them are very kind and friendly persons. I like travelling with them. What moved me most, is that they have such a close and happy friendship that I couldn’t have in my college life, ever.

   The greatest thing we did together was trying on various kinds of clothes in the fitting rooms.We went to a couple of shops such as H&M and Zara, and bought all the clothes that we liked, even though we wouldn't be able to wear them during daily school-life. We carried as many clothes as we could and were interested in. Then we put them on and took pictures as a memento of our last few of days as teenagers.The experiences were really awesome and exciting. I was so glad that I could share those amazing moments with my best friend.

   About the tourist attractions, the city was totally burnt up. We had to stay indoors with the air conditions in the noon. On the first day, due to the lack of sleep last night, and waking up early in the morning, I was tired and faint. On the Gulangyu Island, it even got worse.          Angered by the crowded tourists, I lost the strength to move forward. However, I was so selfish then, and paid no attention to the others. Therefore, I messed up my friends’ moods as well. When I finally realized that, I was drowned in an overwhelming guilt and had no idea about how to deal with it. But luckily, my friends were cool with this and we still got along well later.The tourist spots were definitely not as fascinating as the forgiveness and considerations that Bei and her friends delivered to me.
   All in all, the sunshine, the beach, and all the tourist attractions didn’t give me the deepest impression. It is you guys who have given me the most wonderful memories. I do appreciate that. Thank you very much for your time and considerations.

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