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i was so sad and feeling not good because my best friend and I was broken 2 months ago. I can't belive it is true. We had had a lot of happy memories with together but i can't understand why did he leave me and let me alone. He said that he wanted to be alone and tried to work. He said he didn't have enough time for me. He said that he just wanted to stopped and wanted alone. He is really a bad boy. I want to forget him but it so difficult. I used to think we will happy with together forever but now it make me falling down, make me stress and make me crazy. How can i forget him right now? I wish he was here. :( my heart was broken.
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Broken
I am so sad and do not feel good because my best boyfriend and I was broke up 2 months ago. I can't belive it is true. We had had a lot of happy memories with together and I can't understand why did he left me and let me alone. He said that he wanted to be alone and tried to work (I am not sure what you're trying to say here, but I don't think you need this part). He said he didn't have enough time for me. He said that he just wanted to stop and wanted to be alone. He is a really bad boy. I want to forget him but it so difficult. I used to think we would be happy with together forever but now it make me falling down,(I'm not sure what you meant here, maybe it feels like I'm always falling down?) makes me stressed and makes me feel crazy. How can I forget him right now? I wish he was here. :( My heart is broken.
First, I'm sorry you have to go through a breakup, they're always hard but you will make it through and become a better person for it!
Second, you're writing & vocabulary were very good! Remember to capitalize 'I' as well as the first word in every sentence!
Hope you feel better soon & keep up the good work!!
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actually He is my Ex boyfriend but I don't want to say that because it make me so so sad. I had tried to forget him but it's seem like very difficult. I know I need to forget him and that is the best way for me. As the song's name: The heart want what it want. When people grow up, always have a lot of trouble to think. Haizzz. I wish i was a child nothing to think and nothing to make me cry.
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we can't forget quickly. it's always slowly.
i have ideas, when you miss him, you should do something like learning English or something. day by day, you will better.
maybe, it's is easy way to forget
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i think that its a natural occurrence and you should try forget it.
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Your best friend or your Ex. What do you mean, you said you were broken? If you and him are couple. Broken up is what you mean.
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