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E-mail. Hi Tom, I'm writing to tell you about my exchange trip to Manchester. I stayed for one week in Smiths house. Their flat was big and spacious! They had a mighty swimming pool too. Another fantastic thing was beautiful furniture inside their house. I spent a great time with Smiths! The best was the last day. It was evening and we were watching the match between Liverpool FC and Manchester United. Living in their family was interesting. English breakfast is delicious! Besides conditions are much better than Polish. But I have to say about drawbacks. For some people food might be a problem, because it's very fat. Furthermore, British society is not hospitable like Polish . I was in England so now is your turn! I hope that you will come to Poland. We could go to my favourite club in Warsaw! That's all for now. Write soon Jacob

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E-mail.

Hi Tom,
I'm writing to tell you about my exchange trip to Manchester.

I stayed for one week in Smiths house. Their flat was big and spacious, They had a mighty (use a different word for large) swimming pool too. Another fantastic thing was beautiful furniture inside their house.

I spent a great time with Smiths! The best (day) was the last day. It was evening and we were watching the match between Liverpool FC and Manchester United.

Living in their family was interesting. English breakfast is delicious! Besides (The) conditions are much better than Polish. But I have to say about drawbacks. For some people food might be a problem, because it's very fat. Furthermore, British society is not (as) hospitable like (as) Polish (why?)
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I was in England so now (it) is your turn! I hope that you will come to Poland. We could go to my favourite club in Warsaw!

That's all for now.
Write soon (sounds too strict)
Jacob

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