Hey, guys! My new essay for toefl. Children today play very violent games...

I remember when I played video games in my childhood, 30 years ago – with wooden guns and plastic knives. The most awful violence that could happen was our struggle with each other without any special tools. Obviously, it looked very innocent. However, today children play computer games. The level of computer games is increasing so fast that there is a big problem in the modern world in my opinion. I can provide at least three reasons for this statement.

The first reason that computer games are dangerous for children that young. People unlike adults cannot sometimes differentiate real world and imaginary world. When they look at the violence in the imaginary world, where violence often tends to exaggerate, they transmit these acts in the real world. Especially, it is dangerous when children have an access to real weapons. If you can kill somebody in computer games, why don’t you kill them in reality? 

Secondly, creation agencies which provide new computer games to the market need to make them more and more realistic because it makes them a lot of money. I think we could say that – the more realistic game is, the more money it makes for the creator.

And finally, once more I will talk about money, computer games become more and more violent. Why? I can provide one parallel. The factory has to improve its product by increasing quality or taste, or add some spices. So, the spice in computer games is violence. The more violence the more taste. By the way, I am sure that creators of computer games have to have responsibility for their product, because often it seems like propaganda of violence.

In conclusion, based on the argument explored above, I can say that computer games without a doubt lead to the increase in violence for several reasons. Young people often do not differentiate real world from the imaginary one; computer games are becoming more and more violent; computer games becoming more and more realistic.