Why I love London

This note should be a kind of list where I am going to write down the things I like the most here in London. You are welcome to state your point of view and comment.

- American coffee.
This could seem quite strange, since I am Italian and I come from the country of espresso, but I have always drunk Americano and here I can take my big hot cup of black coffee without anyone observing me with disappointment. The 'only little' problem is the price... Here everything is so expensive.

- Parks.
Even though London is one of the biggest and most crowded cities in the world, it is very clean and regal, and its parks are amazing. They have flowers, majestic fountains, ancient and fascinating buildings, And, above all, you can find a lot of squirrels!

- Cab and Double decker.
I am almost 28 years old, but everytime I have to get on a bus I punctually go upstairs and (sit?/stand?) in front of the window like a child. I don't understand why tourists spend 12 pounds for tours on buses, when with just 1.50 they can take a normal one that make a central route.

- The great choice of cereal and granola at Sainsbury!

- The creative environment.
I am here to study interior design and I have never felt so excited. People can walk down the street as they want, without being judged or observed if they have hair like this or a coat like that, etc... You are free.

I don't know if I will remain here for all my life. I don't think so because I want to live in different countries. But when I'll have finished travelling and choose a place to stay, London will be one of the options.

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Brava! Great job! Some of the corrections I have made are just to change a few words to make something more idiomatic in English. But *finish* takes the -ing form, not the infinitive. *Punctually* usually means *on time*, so maybe *immediately* or *promptly* is what you want to use here. Once you are on the bus, you don't really have to be "on time" to go upstairs.

Why I love London

This note shall be a list of sorts where I am going to write down the things that I like the most here in London. You are welcome to share your opinion and comment.

- American coffee.
It could be quite strange, since I am Italian and I come from the country of the Espresso, but I have always drunk Americano, and here I can order my big hot cup of black coffee without anyone looking at me with disappointment. The 'only little' problem is the price... Everything here is so expensive.

- Parks.
Even though London is one of the biggest and most crowded cities in the world, it is very clean and regal,its parks are amazing! They have flowers, majestic fountains, ancient and fascinating buildings, And, above all, you can find a lot of squirrels!

- Cabs and Double deckers.
I am almost 28 years old, but everytime I have to get on a bus I punctually go upstair and in front of the window like a child. I don't understand why tourists spend 12 pounds for Tours on buses, when with just 1.50 they can take a normal one that takes a central route.

- The great choice of cereal and granola at Sainsbury!

- The creative environment.
I am here to study Interior design and I have never felt so excited. People can walk down the street as they want, without being judged or peered at if they have hair like this or a coat like that, etc... You are free to be yourself.

I don't know if I will remain here for the rest of my life, I don't think so because I want to explore different countries. But when I'll have finished travelling and decided to choose a place to stay, London will be one of the top options.

try to substitute "like" for "as" (almost always more correct)

i assume you lived in a small town so you're not used to the city life.

enjoy your stay