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Today I'm writting about... music! Hi!! How are you? I'm a little tired, 'cause I was studing all afternoon and I think it will be a long night owing to I have much to study yet. But, as I have to take a break too, I'm dedicatting ten or fifteen minutes to write a post, and today I've decided to speak about music!! As I told many times, I study music, concretely, I play the piano. I believe I started when I was eight years old, I'm not sure, (hace mucho tiempo). But my ferst contact with the music it was when I was five years old: my parents took me to a concert in wich played my cousin and other girl. My cousin played (and play) the piano, and the other girl, the violin. I rememored that my parents said to me a million times before enter to the concert that I musn't speak neither cry. I said them that I wasn't going to cry neither speak. As I promised, I didn't speak neither cry, and for surprise for all, I was enjoying the concert. When the concert finished, my partents and all my family asked me if I liked it, I said them that I loved it so much. Three years later, my mum added me to the music school of my village. The secretary asked me what instrument I want to play. I said very serious: I want to play the violin, as my cousin's friend. But the secretary answerd me that there wasn't this instrument, and that I must choose other. Again, I said her very serious: if there isn't the violin, I want to play the piano, as my cousin! and it was all. Years later, my piano's teacher, who I love so much, purposed me to do the exam for entry to the conservatory. I said: yes, of course! I passed the entrance' exams and I met my new teacher, who I love too so much, and who's for me like my sister, and a lot of new friends! Now, I continue with the music, and I will continue for many years! I love the piano, and I'm grateful with the destinity for offer me the piano and not the violin! Now, it's more beautiful for me than the violin! Also, I love the music and all that she brings with her. And it's all! I hope not have a lot of faults, but I don't think that this it's possible haha. Bye, bye! See you in two days. With love, Mary.

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Music 

     I'm tired because I have been studying all afternoon. It's going to be a long night because I still have a lot to study. I want to take a break, so I'm taking ten or fifteen minutes to write a post. I've decided to write about music this time. 
     I study music, and the piano is my instrument. My interest in music started when I was about eight years old, but my first experience with music happened was when I was five. My parents took me to a concert that my cousin, and another girl were performing in. My cousin played the piano and the other girl played the violin. I remember my parents telling me a million times before before entering that I must not speak or start crying. I told then that I wouldn't, and to everyone's surprise I enjoyed myself. After the concert my family asked me if I liked it, and I said "I loved it so much".
     Three years later, my mother enrolled me in my town's music school. The School Secretary asked me what instrument I wanted to play, and I said, very seriously: "I want to play the violin like my cousin's friend." The secretary answered that the school didn't provide training on that instrument, and that I had to choose another. Again, very seriously, I replied: "if not the violin, I want to play the piano, like my cousin."  
     Years later, my beloved piano teacher proposed that I test for admission to the conservatory, and I replied: "yes; of course." I passed the entrance exams, and I met my teacher, who I have also come to adore like a sister. I also made a lot of friends. 
     I've continued studying music, and plan to for many years to come. When I look back, I appreciate that twist of fate which led me to piano instead of violin. I love music and all that she brings with her. 

     María, que puedes ser un músico, pero eres también un escritor muy talentoso. Esto está bien escrito — pensativo, y honesto. Espero que los cambiós sugerí son útiles para ti. 

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Today I'm writting about... music!

Hi!!
How are you?
I'm a little tired, BEcause I HAVE BEEN STUDYING all afternoon and I think iT'S GOING TO BE A long night AS I STILL have much to study.  But, I have DECIDED to take a break.  I'm dedicatting ten or fifteen minutes to write a post, and today I've decided to speak about music!!


As I HAVE SAID many times, I study music AND play the piano. I believe I started when I was eight years old, I'm not sure. (hace mucho tiempo). But I FIRST HAD contact with music when I was five years old: my parents took me to a concert in WHICH my cousin and other girl PLAYED.  My cousin played the piano and the other girl, violin. BEFORE GOING IN I REMEMBER my parents TELLING me a million times THAT I musn't speak OR cry. I PROMISED them that I wOULDN'T AND SURPRISED THEM ALL BY KEEPING QUIET. I was enjoying the concert. When the concert finished my parents and family asked me if I liked it, I TOLD them that I loved it VERY much.



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Today I'm writing about... music!

 

Hi!!


How are you?


I'm a little tired, 'cause I was studying all afternoon and I think it will be a long night owing to the fact that I have much to study. But, as I have to take a break too, I'm dedicating ten or fifteen minutes to write a post. Today I've decided to speak about music!!


As I've mentioned many times, I study music, specifically, I play the piano. I believe I started when I was eight years old but I'm not sure, it's too long ago. But my first contact with music was when I was five years old. My parents took me to a concert in which my cousin and another girl were playing. My cousin played (and plays) the piano, and the other girl, the violin. I remember that my parents said to me a million times before entering the concert that I must neither speak nor cry. I said to them that I wasn't going to cry or speak. As I promised, I didn't speak or cry, and the best surprise of all, I enjoyed the concert. When it finished, my parents and all my family asked me if I liked it, I said to them that I loved it so much.


Three years later, my mum enrolled me at the music school in my village. The secretary asked me what instrument I wanted to play. I said very seriously that I wanted to play the violin, like my cousin's friend. But the secretary answered that this instrument wasn't available, and that I must choose another. Again, I said to her very seriously that if there was no violin, I wanted to play the piano, like my cousin! 


Years later, my piano teacher, who I love so much, proposed that I take the entry exam for the conservatory. I said, "yes, of course!"


I passed the entrance exams and I met my new teacher, who I love too, so much, and who's for me like my sister. I also made a lot of new friends!


Now, I continue with music, and I will continue for many years!


I love the piano, and I'm grateful to destiny for offering me the piano and not the violin! Now, it's more beautiful for me than the violin!


Also, I love music and all that she brings with her.

I hope to not have a lot of faults, but I don't think that this is possible, haha.


Bye, bye!


See you in two days.


With love,


Mary.

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