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Impressions of London London is a wondrous city. The streets are paved with a blend of the historical and modern. Elizabeth Tower housing the world famous Big Ben, the Tower of London housing the Crown Jewels, Tower Bridge, Nelson’s Column, the Globe theatre, Buckingham Palace, St. Paul’s Cathedral, all echoes of the past. And then you find the London Eye, the Shard, Docklands, all setting apace into the future. The busy, bustling streets, the black cabs, the red buses, so much to see and do in this vibrant city. I would highly recommend that you pay London a visit at least once in your life.

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Impressions of London

London is a wondrous city. The streets are paved with gold and a blend of the historical and modern. Elizabeth Tower housing the world famous Big Ben, the Tower of London housing the Crown Jewels, Tower Bridge, Nelson’s Column, the Globe theatre, Buckingham Palace, St. Paul’s Cathedral, all echoes of the past. And then you find the London Eye, the Shard, Docklands, all setting apace into the future. The busy, bustling streets, the black cabs, the red buses, so much to see and do in this vibrant city. I would highly recommend that you pay London a visit at least once in your life.

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Impressions of London

London is a wondrous city. The streets are paved with a blend of the historical and modern. Elizabeth Tower, housing the world-famous Big Ben, the Tower of London, housing the Crown Jewels, Tower Bridge, Nelson’s Column, the Globe Theatre, Buckingham Palace, St. Paul’s Cathedral -- all are echoes of the past. And then you find the London Eye, the Shard, Docklands, all setting the pace into the future. The busy, bustling streets, the black cabs, the red buses -- so much to see and do in this vibrant city. I would highly recommend that you pay London a visit at least once in your life.

 

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