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Space war. Goomey threatens the universe. Continue Early in the morning my companions was waking because they heard a wild scream. -What happened? It were demons?-Asked Iron Dancer. -About as - Respound I - That was the Dimon. (local joke). He was following me. Where is Den? Till now I didn't see, that Den was missing. -Sunny Den went to the forest. He want to find there... -Berries !? Some Berries !? -You deducted absolutely right! Little later Den had come back out of the forest. -Did you find your berries?-Asked Iron Dancer -I found nothing. -replied Den. -No problem! The sky is clear today! - It was my attempt to joke. Den looked at me with his angry and unhappy face. That moment I understood-"why did I do it?" The best joke in the world couldn't make his face more happy. I decided don't stop: -Tell me,Den,how do you feel without of some food? If the sun get out of here, you want to eat. Den's face got more angry,than it was before. I was trying to hold my chuckle, but I couldn't to do it. I got looking at Iron Dancer. He understood me

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Space war. Goomey threatens the universe. Continued


Early in the morning my companions was were waking up (or awakening) because they hac heard a wild scream.
-"What happened? It were Was it demons?-" Asked Iron Dancer.
-"About as good as " I responded. - Respound I - "That was the Dimon. (local joke). He was following me. Where is Den?" 
Till now, I didn't hadn't seen, that Den was missing.
-"Sunny Den went to the forest. He wants to find there..." (or you can't have there if you wish to imply that the speaker was cut off, because "He wants to find there berries" is not a grammatically correct sentence. If you wish to include there you would have to phrase it: He went there wanting to find...)
-"Berries !? Some Berries !?"
-"You deducted deduced so absolutely right!"
A little later Den had come back out of from the forest.
-"Did you find your berries?" Asked Iron Dancer
-"I found nothing." - replied Den.
-"No problem! The sky is clear today!" - It was my attempt to at a joke.
Den looked at me with his angry and unhappy face. That moment I understood- "why did I do it?". The best joke in the world couldn't make his face more happier. 
I decided don't not to stop:
-"Tell me, Den, how do you feel without of some food? If the sun get got out of here, you'd want to eat." Den's face got more angry, than it was before. I was trying to hold back my chuckle, but I couldn't to do it. I got looking looked at Iron Dancer. He understood me

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