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When I'm on way back from work, I like watching people in subway. I don't look directly at their faces though. Instead I look at their reflections in the dark train's windows. It's fun and sometimes you get to see some really interested characters. Today for example I saw to young fellows that were probably the street artists. They landed right next to me and started practicing card tricks.
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Today's Entry
When I'm on the/my way back from work, I like watching people in the subway. I don't look directly at their faces though. Instead, I look at their reflections in the dark train's windows. It's fun, and sometimes you get to see some really interesting characters. Today for example, I saw two young fellows who/that [1] were probably the street artists. They landed right next to me, and started practicing card tricks.
[1] I think that "who" is better when speaking about a person, but "that" is sometimes acceptable. Here is a discussion of the matter:
http://www.thewritingsite.org/who-vs-that/
"They landed right next to me" sounds very good. All in all, your paragraph is very well written.
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this is such a cute story. I think I will follow you so I can read more. I hope you continue to write more of these
Charmaine
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