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Spain flagMarta~
Kimono ni tsuite Konnichiwa minasan. Watashi wa kimono no tsuite setsumei wo shimasu ga, takusan hi wo kaita to omoimasu. Yondekurete arigatou gozaimasu! Mukashi kara nihonjin wa kimono wo kimasu. Kimono wa nihon no dentouteki doresu desu. Iroirona kimono no rui ga arimasu kara, josei to dansei to kodomo wa kimono wo kiru koto ga dekimasu. Kawatta kimono ga kaku chansu no tame ni arimasu. Tatoeba, kekkonshiki to matsuri. Kimono wa iro to nuno to kire yoruto sai ya sei ya ki wo kawarimasu. "Japanese people have been wearing "kimono" since a long time. "Kimono" is a traditional japanese dress.There are many kind of "kimono" so man, women and children can wear it. There is a different kimono for each chance. For example, for weddings and festivals. "Kimono" changes its colour, style and path depending on the age, the gender or season."

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Kimono ni tsuite

Konnichiwa minasan. Watashi wa kimono nino tsuite no setsumei wo shimasu (o "kimono ni tsuite setsumei shimasu) ga, takusan hi wo kaita machigaeta to omoimasu. Yondekurete arigatou gozaimasu! (Es la frase al final de tu nota, para antes de leerlo, sería mejor decir: naoshite moraetara uresii desu = estaría contenta si me corrijan.)

Mukashi kara nihonjin wa kimono wo kiteimasu (o kiteimashita). Kimono wa nihon no dentouteki na doresu desu. Iroirona kimono no shurui ga arimasu. Desukara, josei moto dansei moto kodomo mowa kimono wo kiru koto ga dekimasu. ChigauKawatta kimono ga sorezore no mokuteki kaku chansu no tame ni arimasu. Tatoeba, kekkonshiki to matsuri oiwai no tame no kimono ga arimasu. Kimono wa iro to nuno to katachikire ni yotte ruto, nenreisai ya seibetsu ya kisetsu ni yottemo wo kawarimasu.

"Japanese people have been wearing "kimono" since a long time. "Kimono" is a traditional japanese dress.There are many kind of "kimono" so man, women and children can wear it. There is a different kimono for each chance. For example, for weddings and festivals. "Kimono" changes its colour, style and path depending on the age, the gender or season."

 

 

¡Hola Marta! ¡Cuanto tiempo! Me alegra mucho de que haya podido leer tu nota hoy. ¡muy buen trabajo! Espero que te ayude. Chao. 

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