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St Patrick's Day Hey everyone, Today is my first entry in English in my notebook. It' also the first day of the rest of my life, but this is another story. I was talking an hour ago with my conversation partner, Kevin from Canada, and I realized that I didn't know what Saint Patrick's day was about. What's the matter with me ? So I googled it and opened the first answer : wikipedia (in English of course :p ). Saint Patrick's Day is a cultural and christian celebration in Ireland. Ok, everyone knows it. In fact, it commemorates St Patrick and the arrival of Christianity in Ireland, and celebrates Irish's culture and heritage. But on wikipedia page, you can see that many countries celebrate this day (Japan, Switzerland,... and even International Space Station!). I think for them it's just another way to get drunk and put a green t-shirt they never wear the rest of the year! Anyway, happy Saint Patrick Day to all Irish people on Italki (and beyond :p ).

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St Patrick's Day

Hey everyone,
Today is my first entry in English in my notebook. It' [It's, but I think this was just a typo] also the first day of the rest of my life, but this is another story.
I was talking an hour ago with my conversation partner, Kevin from Canada, and I realized that I didn't know what Saint Patrick's Day [Day is capatalized because it's part of the whole proper noun, Saint Patrick's Day] was about. What's the matter with me?
So I googled it and opened the first answer: Wikipedia (in English of course :p ). Saint Patrick's Day is a cultural and christian celebration in Ireland. Ok, everyone knows it [that, instead of 'it' sounds better].
In fact, it commemorates St. Patrick and the arrival of Christianity in Ireland, and [it, clarify your subject] celebrates Irish's culture and heritage.
But on [the] wikipedia page, you can see that many countries celebrate this day (Japan, Switzerland,... and even [the] International Space Station!). I think for them it's just another way to get drunk and put [on, 'to put on' is the verb for wearing clothing] a green t-shirt they never wear the rest of the year!
Anyway, happy Saint Patrick Day to all Irish people on Italki (and beyond :p ).

 

Well written! Also, at least in the States, St. Patrick's Day got really big after we had a lot of Irish immigrants after the Great Potato Famine, and all the displaced Irish wanted to celebrate their heritage. Either way, Happy St. Patrick's Day to you too!

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Thanks you, and Happy Saint Patrick Day to you. By the way, your English is good.

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