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Some questions! - "The fifth of November I took a flight to Dublin" or "On the fifth of November I took a flight to Dublin?" -I went there to make up with the idea I had of that city and with the bad feelings I had made up in my mind -For me it’d always been important to make up with places

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Some questions!

- "The fifth of November I took a flight to Dublin" or "On the fifth of November I took a flight to Dublin?"
-I went there to make up with the idea I had of that city and with the bad feelings I had made up in my mind
-For me it’d always been important to make up with places

 

"On the fifth of November I took a flight..." is preferable to "The fifth of November I took a flight..."

 

I'm not sure of the context of the "making up with places" sentences, they seem ok in a very literary style. 

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PLEASE CORRECT IT!

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