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My journey in Java Part I My name is Fuad. I am Indonesian who live in Medan. I want to tell the story when I go to java for searching a job. A year ago. My sister graduated from her University in Bandung. So My family went to Bandung for attending her graduation. I and my family spent a month there. After that my father and my mother went back home to Medan. But I still stayed there for searching a job with my sister. I went to Bandung, Jakarta, Cilegon, and Bogor alone. But sometimes I went with my sister. We moved from one city to another by public transport. We used train, busway, and car. There was a story when I went to Bogor alone for the first time. I went there by car rental. In that car there were only three people. Me, the driver and a stranger man. I didn't know him at the first time. we departed at 4 am in the morning. So, we were still sleepy. Nobody started the conversation until the driver asked our names and what we were going to do in Bogor. At the first time I didn't interest with the stranger because I felt sleepy. The stranger introduced himself, "My name is Purbayanto, and I am a Professor. I go to Bogor because I live there". And I introduced myself, " My name is Fuad, and I go to Bogor because I have interview in a company". "Oh, what is the name of that company and where the test will be held?". asked Mr. Purbayanto to me. "It is L'oreal, and it will be held in IPB", I said. "It is coincidence, because I work there and I can show you the place. Lets go to my house first. Then, we have a breakfast, you can wash your face there and after that I will take you there", He replied. It was coincidence I met a man that was very important person. He was a nice person. We talked many topics about science, scholarship, about his projects on the trip until we arrived at his house. Wow, the time run so fast. It felt like one hour, but actually from Bandung to Bogor it took three to four hours. After he took me to the University by his car. He described me how to go back to Bandung step by step. When we separate, I speak in my mind that I would never ignore people around me anymore. Perhaps they would help me or they would lead me to something.

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My journey in Java Part I

My name is Fuad. I am Indonesian who live in Medan. I want to tell the story when I go to java for searching a job.
A year ago. My sister graduated from her University in Bandung. So My family went to Bandung for attending her graduation. I and my family spent a month there. After that my father and my mother went back home to Medan. But I still stayed there for searching a job with my sister. I went to Bandung, Jakarta, Cilegon, and Bogor alone. But sometimes I went with my sister. We moved from one city to another by public transport. We used train, busway, and car.
There was a story when I went to Bogor alone for the first time. I went there by car rental. In that car there were only three people. Me, the driver and a stranger man. I didn't know him at the first time. we departed at 4 am in the morning. So, we were still sleepy. Nobody started the conversation until the driver asked our names and what we were going to do in Bogor.
At the first time I didn't interest with the stranger because I felt sleepy. The stranger introduced himself, "My name is Purbayanto, and I am a Professor. I go to Bogor because I live there". And I introduced myself, " My name is Fuad, and I go to Bogor because I have interview in a company".
"Oh, what is the name of that company and where the test will be held?". asked Mr. Purbayanto to me. "It is L'oreal, and it will be held in IPB", I said. "It is coincidence, because I work there and I can show you the place. Lets go to my house first. Then, we have a breakfast, you can wash your face there and after that I will take you there", He replied.
It was coincidence I met a man that was very important person. He was a nice person. We talked many topics about science, scholarship, about his projects on the trip until we arrived at his house. Wow, the time run so fast. It felt like one hour, but actually from Bandung to Bogor it took three to four hours.
After he took me to the University by his car. He described me how to go back to Bandung step by step. When we separate, I speak in my mind that I would never ignore people around me anymore. Perhaps they would help me or they would lead me to something.

 

'who live' : and I live
'the story when I go to java for searching a job' :
the story of/about when I went to Java to search/look for a job
'A year ago. My sister graduated . . ' : A year ago my sister graduated . . [one sentence]
' . . in Bandung. So My family went to Bandung for attending . . ' : in Bandung, so my family went to Bandung to attend . .
'I and my family spent a month there' : I spent/stayed a month there with my family
'my father and my mother' : my father and mother
' . . to Medan. But I still stayed there . . ' : to Medan, but I stayed there/stayed on . .
'for searching a job' : to search/look for a job
'I went to Bandung, Jakarta, Cilegon, and Bogor alone. But sometimes I went with my sister.' :
I went alone to Bandung, Jakarta, Cilegon, and Bogor, but sometimes I went to other places with my sister.
'a story when' : a story about
'there were only three people: myself, the driver and a stranger, a man
'know him at the first time' : at first know him
'At the first time I didn't interest with' :
At first I was not interested in
'I go to Bogor' : I am going to Bogor
'And I introduced myself, . . ' : I introduced myself : . .
'I go to Bogor because I have interview' : I am going to Bogor because I have an interview
'where the test will' : where will the test
'asked Mr. Purbayanto to me' : Mr. Purbayanto asked me
'It was coincidence I met a man that was very important person' :
It was coincidence that I met a man who was a very important person
'We talked many topics about . . ' :
We talked on many topics about . .
'the time run so fast' : the time goes so quickly/fast
'After he took me to the University by his car.' : After that he took me to the University in his car.
'He described me how to go back to Bandung' :
He told/showed/described to me how to go back to Bandung
'When we separate' : When we parted/separated
'I speak in my mind' : I told myself
'anymore' : any more [two words]

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Thank you, Mr. Kirill. I will make next part the other time. Please read it too.
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This is a good story and most important - it is a wise conclusion)))

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