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My Dream!
My dream is to work or study abroad. I know that it this is so easy with for most of people, but it is not easy with for me. I have graduated from a famous university in Vietnam. It's famous because most of the students who have graduated from this university are so very good in at English. But my English is not well as good as theirs.them. After graduation, graduated, most my friends go to went abroad to study. Others find found good jobs. But me, I am just a staff employee for an import-export company with a low salary. I always feel so ashamed. Maybe I don't have sufficient willpower a big will, or maybe I'm not as good as them, but I also have a big dream and now I won't sell don't want to loss myself short anymore. I can't regress. backward. The first important thing that I must do is learn English. I will try my best to improve my English skills. Where there is a will, there is a way, fighting!
You will help me, is it right? ^^
Other comments:
1) One sentence ends with this phrase: "an import-export company with a low salary." Although a reader will understand what you mean, the phrase "with a low salary" seems to modify "an import-export company" instead of modifying the words "staff employee." You might consider rearranging the sentence.
2) I am not sure what you mean by: "I can't backward." I tried to make the minimal change that might still be consistent with your intent.
3) I am not sure what you mean by: "I don't want to loss myself anymore." I substituted this phrase: "I won't sell myself short anymore." The phrase "sell myself short" is an English idiom. To "sell myself short" means (roughly) to underestimate my value or to make decisions that cause a person to fail to reach his/her potential.
Good job, and don't give up!
My dream !
I have a dream to go abroad and get study there with good job.I know that it is so easy with most of people but it is not easy for me. I have graduated from famous university in Vietnam. It's famous because most of student who graduated by this university., they are all so good in English. But my English is not well like others. After graduated, most my friends went to abroad for study, others found good jobs, but I am just a staff employe in import-export company with a low salary. I always feel so ashamed. I don't have a big success. but I have a big dream and now I don't want to loss myself anymore. I can't backward. The first important thing is English, I will try my best to improve my English skills.
You will help me, is it right.
Best of luck
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