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An Unforgettable Experience There are many things happened in my childhood. I still remember the most funny one. I was 3 years old when I had my first rabbit. I really love it because it is different from others. It had gray fur and black eyes. The rabbit named Xiao Hui. The one thing which same as others is that Xiao Hui smells bad. However, I fed and play with it everyday. Never felt tiresome. But things didn’t go well-off. One day when I go home, I found Xiao Hui disappered. My first thought was to ask my mom where it is. My mom told me, “There is a beautiful girl on moon named Chang’E. She came our home today and liked Xiao Hui very much, so she took Xiao Hui away to make herb for her. Not every rabbit has opportunity to go to moon, only smart rabbit can do this. So don’t be sad my daughter, this is a good thing for Xiao Hui.” You have no idea how sad I felt at that moment, but I believe Xiao Hui was outstanding, like I first saw it, so it was took to moon. After that, I asked my mom to watch moon with me every night. She pointed a small spot and told me that’s Xiao Hui’s shadow. It was playing with Chang’E and lived very happy. It had been a long time until I knew there is no people on moon, all the story about Chang’E are fairy tales. I asked my mom again about where Xiao Hui was. She finally told me the truth that she sent it to other when I was at kindergarten because rabbit smells thorough bad.

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An Unforgettable Experience

A lot of things happened in my childhood. I still remember the most funniest one.
I was 3 years old when I got my first rabbit. I really love it because it was different from others. It had gray fur and black eyes. The rabbit name was Xiao Hui. The one thing which was the same as others rabbits is that Xiao Hui smelled bad. However, I fed it and play with it everyday.  
But things didn’t go well. One day when I got home, I found that Xiao Hui had disappered. My first thought was to ask my mom where it was. My mom told me: “There is a beautiful girl on the moon named Chang’E. She came to our home today and liked Xiao Hui very much, so she took Xiao Hui away to make herb for her. Not every rabbit has the opportunity to go to the moon, only smart rabbits can do this. So don’t be sad my daughter, this is a good thing for Xiao Hui.” You have no idea how sad I felt at that moment, but I believe Xiao Hui was outstanding(?), like when I first saw it, so it was taken to moon. After that, I asked my mom to watch the moon with me every night. She pointed to a small spot and told me that’s Xiao Hui’s shadow, it was playing with Chang’E and living very happily.
It has been a long time since I learned there are no people on the moon. All the story about Chang’E was a fairytale. I asked my mom again where Xiao Hui was and she finally told me the truth that she gave it to another kid when I was at kindergarten because rabbits smell too bad.

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