Future plan

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After finishing my master degree in international commerce, firstly, I am going back to my family to help them in with the family business. We have a factory of/producing cleaning materials in Saudi Arabia. So/Therefore with what I will learn my accumulated knowledge of international commerce and trade (trade & commerce generally mean the same so don't be repetitive), I can help them to enter to the Global Market(s). I will give/provide them with (this is more polite ^^) the right information to know about how the commerce and trade is happening   the dynamics of commerce between countries and how our different ways in which our factory can be a part of it. Also/In addition, I will try to make some communication establish sustainable relationships with a big major companies in the world that who may have some be interested in our works to work together.  cooperating with us. 
Behind After that, I will make conduct my own researches about to compare the international commerce between the Arabic countries and the others and another other countries to do compared between them and to know what commerce and trade we can develop it or avoid it   in order to identify potential trades for development while avoiding disadvantagous factors. That Consequently, I will be more aware of current affairs will make me abreast about everything is happening in the world of the international commerce. Thus I can develop my thought ideas and strategies. Furthermore, I will do some researches about on Arab country’s (which country specifically?)  international relations with other countries to know how our relation understand in economics and commerce are strong with other countries. our strengths and weaknesses, And which countries will be useful more another. as well as the potential benefits from our relationship. 
Additionally, I am going to apply to get for a doctor degree in my some major “international commerce” because it will make me more skillful  adept and useful capable in this field. 


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