Feel sad. It's raining outside.I get up early.I couldn't sleep well during these days.When I fall asleep,I always dream of my grandpas.And everytime wake up from dreams,I feel so sad.Tomb-sweeping day

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心如止水

Feel sad. It's raining outside.I get up early.I couldn't sleep well during these days.When I fall asleep,I always dream of my grandpas.And everytime wake up from dreams,I feel so sad.Tomb-sweeping day is coming soon.Maybe I should go to the montain and see them.

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It's raining outside. I got up early. I haven't been able to sleep well these days. When I fall asleep, I always dream of my grandparents ("grandpas" is only men, "grandparents" includes grandfathers and grandmothers) and every time I wake up from my dreams, I feel so sad. Tomb Sweeping Day is coming soon. Maybe I should go to the mountain(s) and see them.

Good job. Remember to use a space after a period or comma. Is Tomb Sweeping Day an important celebration in your country?

I feel sad.

It's raining outside. I get up early. I don't sleep well these days. When I fall asleep, I always dream of my grandpa/grandfather. Everytime I wake up from my dreams, I feel so sad.Tomb-sweeping (Tomb-sweeping?) day is coming soon. Maybe I should go to the mountain and see them. (See who?)

Good, if you want to write all present tense. Always have a space after "," and ".". Never start a sentence with "and".

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