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Under the Dome
I read a curious article today. It was about the great amount of pollution China is making/generating and its influence on the climate change. Scientists were mainly referring to the changes in North America. They said that a lot of particles sent/emitted into the atmosphere (soot from fires, different/various gases from industries, etc.) contributed to the condensation of vapor, creating a the perfect nuclei for the formation of storms in the Pacific ocean. Those clouds finally/eventually reached the eastern American coast and were responsible for the many cold snaps they have been having over the last winter months, which resulted in an incredible amount of snow in cities like Boston, for example. It was amazing to see in the news how people had to work their way out of their houses. A simple daily routine as going to work, turning, this way, into a real adventure. Here, in Spain, even in the centre of the country, which is supposed to have extreme weather conditions (cold winters and hot summers), when only some snow flakes fall from the sky, the "terrible" weather is in all conversations at work. Supposing You figure you have been "lucky" enough just to reach your destination because all trains coming from the towns at the foot of the mountains surrounding the city are hopelessly delayed. So funny!!
Great job, Tiana! Interesting article. A lot of our precipitation (in the NE US) comes from the Caribbean as well. Cheers!
Under the dome
I read a curious article today. It was about the great amount of pollution China is making and its influence on the climate change. Scientists were mainly referring to the changes in North America. They said that a lot of particles sent into the atmosphere (soot from fires, different gases from industries etc) contributed to the condensation of vapor creating a perfect nuclei for the formation of storms in the Pacific ocean. Those clouds finally reached the eastern American coast and were responsible for the many cold snaps they have been having over the last winter months, which resulted in an incredible amount of snow in cities like Boston, for example. It was amazing to see in the news how people had to work dig their way out of their houses. A simple daily routine such as going to work turning, in this way, into a real adventure. Here, in Spain, even in the centre of the country, which is supposed to have extreme weather conditions (cold winters and hot summers), when only some a few snow flakes fall from the sky the "terrible" weather is in all conversations (or is all people talk about) at work. Supposing Assuming you have been lucky enough to reach your destination because all trains coming from the towns at the foot of the mountains surrounding the city are hopelessly delayed. So funny!!
Aha! So that's why I had to shovel 25cm of snow from my driveway last week!
Extremely well written. Only a couple of minor corrections are in red plus some suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.
Right off the bat I just want to say, this is incredible, very well done, your English is amazing. I noticed a few things though and I imagine you're on here to get them corrected, so I'll just point them out to you.
Under the dome
I read a curious article today. It was about the great amount of pollution China is making and its influence on the climate change. Scientists were mainly referring to the changes in North America. They said that a lot of particles sent into the atmosphere (soot from fires, different gases from industries, etc.) contributed to the condensation of vapor creating a perfect nuclei for the formation of storms in the Pacific ocean. Those clouds finally reached the eastern American coast and were responsible for the many cold snaps they have been having over the last winter months, which resulted in an incredible amount of snow in cities like Boston, for example. It was amazing to see in the news how people had to work their way out of their houses. A simple daily routine as going to work turning, this way, into a real adventure. [So, you have a couple of options with this previous sentence. You could begin it with "so" instead of "a", So simple a daily routine as, or A simple daily routine, such as going to work.] Here, in Spain, even in the centre of the country, which is supposed to have extreme weather conditions (cold winters and hot summers), when only some snowflakes [one word] fall from the sky the "terrible" weather is in all conversations at work. Supposing you have been lucky enough to reach your destination because all trains coming from the towns at the foot of the mountains surrounding the city are hopelessly delayed. [These previous two sentences are slightly awkward, though grammatically correct] So funny!! [Again, great job!]
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