RACCOON
I went a walk with my dogs in the park near my house in the afternoon.
An animal suddenly appeared in front of me and passed by....
It was a raccoon!
I was very suprised that raccoon lives in the park!
I have never seen it except to zoo.
Then I went back to home and made a birthday movie by iphone for my boyfriend.
He loved it!!
I hope I can spend birthday with him next year....
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RACCOON
I went on a walk with my dogs (or took my dogs for a walk) in the park near my house in the afternoon.
An animal suddenly appeared in front of me and passed by...
It was a raccoon!
I was very suprised that a raccoon lived in the park!
I have never seen one except at the zoo.
Then, I went back home and made my boyfriend a movie for his birthday with my iphone.
He loved it!!
I hope I can spend his birthday with him next year....
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RACCOON
I went to take a walk with my dogs (Or I went to walk my dogs) in the park near my house in the afternoon.
An animal suddenly appeared in front of me and passed by....
It was a raccoon!
I was very suprised that raccoons live in the park!
I have never seen it except at the zoo.
Then I went back to home and made a birthday movie with my iphone for my boyfriend.
He loved it!!
I hope I can spend his birthday with him next year....
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