Schedule an Immigrant

Hi everyone,

It's my first text in english and him i want writing a little about my history and my dream of living in other country, me and my wife.

Apologize for my writing and i hope you all enjoy.

Thank you so much, bye!

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Igor it is amazing that you are challenging yourself to write.  I just read a post you wrote about your wife.  With reference to this post "Schedule An Immigrant"  here are my comments.

This is my first text in English.  I am writing a little about my history and my dream of living in another country with my wife.

I apologize for writing; however, I hope you will enjoy my brief post.

I hope this revisions helps.
Dr. Priscilla 

Schedule an Immigrant

Hi everyone,

It's my first text in English and him I want to write a little about my story and my dream of living in other country, me and my wife.

I apologize for my writing and I hope you all enjoy.

Thank you so much, bye!

Schedule an Immigrant

Hi everyone,

This is my first text in English and I want to write a little about my story and my dream of me and my wife living in another country.

I apologize for my writing and I hope you all enjoy.

Thank you so much, bye!