Goal of study & study lan (part 1)

Hello :)
How are you ?!
I need you to check my study plan and if it right or not. 
Thank you in advance:)
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After getting my first aim that is bachelor degree in Korean and English languages. I am going to get master degree in one of international studies "international commerce" because the master degree in this major will help me to improve my thoughts and makes me more elegiacally person I will understand strategies of selling and buying nether what a best strategies nor worst strategies. I will know how the commerce being between countries and  what trade we can get benefit from how we can benefit from trade or when we can avoid it when we do it or what is effact us negatively. This major well put me in straight way to understand how the international companies work and what they need to do good jobs. Because of that I choose to study this major in Korea. Korea is one of the best countries when we talk about commrece and trade. It have many successful international companies also it develops continuously, so it's one of the best places that I can get information and learn about commrece and trade. In this case I can achieve my goal. And I will be helpful person for my country and trying to make it better place, so I can see with my studying languages and international commerce, I can do mix what I need to it to be more creativity.(I actually don't understood what you went to say in the last two sentences)