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Essay 4 - FRIEND I have several girlfriends,but I think Theresa is the best one. We met each other in junior school. As a transfer student,I entered in her class .As time went by ,we knew about each other and became familiar.We were divided into different classes at junior-two but in same class in junior-three and we became deskmates.The friendship between us is truly began from that time. Sometimes I would think this was a destiny,if we hadn't met each other again at junior-three,we didn't be good friends. There also had argue or cold war between us,friendship is like love,must pass through this process. After graduated from junior school, we went different high school,of course we went diffenent universty after graduated from high school. Just think about it,we also seprate,but maybe it's the reason why we will love each other for such a long time. In China we called it " Jù Lí Chǎn Sheng Měi-距离产生美"。We always kept the best part from each other. We are in one city now,we can dine and watch movie together when we miss each other,I felt very lucky and happy. Hope everybody could together with your friends cause it's really a delighted thing.

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Essay 4 - FRIEND

I have several girlfriends,but I think Theresa is the best one.
We met each other in junior school.


As a transfer student,I entered in her class . I entered in her class as a transfer student.

 

As time went by ,we knew about each other and became familiar. As time went by, we got to know and become familiar with each other.

 

We were divided into different classes at junior-two but in same class in junior-three and we became deskmates. During junior-two, we were in different classes but joined each other in junior-three and  became deskmates.

 

The friendship between us is truly began from that time. Our friendship began from that time onwards. (Did the friendship start from junior two or junior three?).


Sometimes I would think this was a destiny,if we hadn't met each other again at junior-three,we didn't be good friends. Sometime, I think this was destined to be. If we had not met each other again at junior-three, we would not have become good friends.


There also had argue or cold war between us,friendship is like love,must pass through this process.

We have also had arguments or treated each other coldly. Friendship is like love and must pass through these tests.


After graduated from junior school, we went different high school,of course we went diffenent universty after graduated from high school. After graduating from junior school, we went to different high schools. From then then on, we went to different universities.

 

Just think about it,we also seprate,but maybe it's the reason why we will love each other for such a long time. Although we have gone in seperate directions, perhaps that is the reason we have loved  each other for a long time.

 

In China we called it " Jù Lí Chǎn Sheng Měi-距离产生美"。 In China, we call this " Jù Lí Chǎn Sheng Měi-距离产生美"。


We always kept the best part from each other. (I am unsure of your meaning here. Does this sentence still refer to the 距离产生美? )


We are in one city now,we can dine and watch movie together when we miss each other,I felt very lucky and happy. Now, we are in the same city. We can dine and watch movies together when we need each other's company. I feel very lucky and happy.


Hope everybody could together with your friends cause it's really a delighted thing. I hope everybody can be together with their friends because it really is a wonderful thing.

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Essay 4 - FRIEND

I have several girlfriends, but I think Theresa is the best one.
We met each other in junior school.
As a transfer student, I entered in to her the class where she was studying. As time went by, we knew much about each other and became familiar closer.We were divided into different classes at junior-two but we were in same class again in junior-three and moreover we became deskmates. The friendship between us is truly began from that time.
Sometimes I would think that this was a destiny, if we hadn't met didn't meet each other again at junior-three, we didn't be couldn't become good friends.
There We also had argue debated with each other or there were some cold wars between us; friendship is like love, it must pass through this process it.

After the graduatedion from junior school, we went to different high schools, of course we went to diffenent universtyies after the graduatedion from high schools.
Just think about it, we also still separated, but maybe it's this is the reason why we will love each other for such a long time.
In China we called it " Jù Lí Chǎn Sheng Měi-距离产生美"。We always keptep the best part from each other.
We are live in one city now, we can dine and watch movies together when if we miss each other. I felt feel very lucky and happy.
I hope everybody could be together with your their friends cause it's a really a delightedful thing feeling.

 

Great job! 

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Essay 4 - FRIEND

I have several girlfriends, but I think Theresa is the best one.
We met each other in junior school.
As a transfer student, I entered in her class. As time went by, we knew about each other and became familiar. We were divided into different classes at in junior-two, but we were in the same class in junior-three and we became deskmates.The friendship between us is truly began from that time.
Sometimes, I would think this it was a destiny, if we hadn't met each other again atin junior-three, we didn't bewouldn't have become good friends.
There also had were arguements or cold wars between us, but friendship is like love, it must pass through this process.
After we graduated from junior school, we went to different high schools, of course we went to diffenent different universtyies after graduateding from high school.
Just think about it, we also were seprate, but maybe it's the reason why we will love each other for such a long time.
In China we called it " Jù Lí Chǎn Sheng Měi-距离产生美"。We always kept the best part from each other.
We are in one city now, we can dine and watch movie together when we miss each other. I felt feel very lucky and happy.
I hope everybody could can be together with your friends cause it's really a delightedful thing.

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