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I learned English conversation in skype English school for six months. I left it from today. And I begin italki on today.
if necessary please suggest better phrase.Thanking you in advance.
This morning,I took my daughter to her nursery at 8:30 with my son.on the way home,I went to the fish shop. I bought a sea bass. I burn it at noon for my son.
Aprendi a conversação inglesa na escola inglesa skype durante seis meses. Deixei-o de hoje. E começo italki em hoje.
se necessário por favor sugira a melhor frase. Agradecer de antemão.
Esta manhã, Tomei uma filha à escola às 8h30.com o meu son.no caminho para casa, fui à loja de peixe. Comprei um baixo do mar. Queimo-o no meio-dia eu vou cozinhar de filho.
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Good essay! I hope that my corrections help!
Burn usually means to overcook something. I changed that to "cooked" but it depends on how you prepared the fish. Maybe you fried, grilled, broiled, sauted or baked the fish. It sounds delicious!
The first essay
I have been learning English conversation in Skype English School for the past six months. I left the school today and began italki.
if necessary please suggest a better phrase. Thank you in advance!
This morning, I took my daughter to her nursery at 8:30 with my son. On the way home, I went to the fish shop and bought a sea bass. I cooked it at noon for my son.
Aprendi a conversação inglesa na escola inglesa skype durante seis meses. Deixei-o de hoje. E começo italki em hoje.
se necessário por favor sugira a melhor frase. Agradecer de antemão.
Esta manhã, Tomei uma filha à escola às 8h30.com o meu son.no caminho para casa, fui à loja de peixe. Comprei um baixo do mar. Queimo-o no meio-dia eu vou cozinhar de filho.
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Yo C さん、 Thank you very much for advice ! I will go on skype lesson on the italki. There are a lot of teacher.
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" Thank you in advance" That's ok! I've never seen the sentence " Thanking you in advance"
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In my opinion u can use italki & skype as well to learn English. on italki, u will have many friends. They'll help u to correct mistakes in your entries. But, when you use skype, they can help you to improve your communicative English ^^
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