AVOIDING ACCIDENTS, A COMMON CAUSE OF DECEASE IN CHILDREN

Did you know that accidents are the most common cause of death in childhood? According to the statistics, the sixty per cent of children´s deaths occur as a result of an accident either at home or at school. Consequently, how can we prevent them from injuring themselves or dying? This is a question we will answer in the following paragraphs. 

On the one hand, as teachers, we should make them aware of all the potential dangers that exist all around the classroom and the school. We should preserve their safety by covering plugs, or keeping chemicals out of their reach. Otherwise, they might get an electrical shock or they might either compromise their internal organs due to the ingestion of chemicals, or even kill themselves in the worst case scenario.

On the other hand, as parents, we shouldn´t leave sharp objects within their reach and we should keep an eye on them constantly if our home has some unsafe areas or things. Furthermore, we should remove the architectectural barriers in those places aimed (better: places where they run and play or designed for them to run and play) for them to run and play.

aimed una buena palabra, un poco raro aquí, pero entiendo

All in all, these preventive measures mentioned above and many more are applicable in both places to create a safe place for them to stay, but to not be overprotective because that would be counterproductive.

última frase es buena pero tienes dos palabras con terminación "-ive" entonces se lee un poco gracioso. Mi consejo es dejala "....but not to be overprotective."  el final