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Something about me I'm an italian girl and in My life i study medicine and i play volleyball. Volleyball is a passion, i started when i was 12 years old, and then i played for 4 years in a team which has the gym at 1 hour distance from My home. It has been hard, but a great experience too: i won the italian campionship and i also did competitions out of italy. I known people that now are My best friends; we have shared very intense moments toghether and that Bond us! Last year i pass the ammision test for medicine university. That was My dream and i'm very happy and proud. Last week i passed My exam of biochemistry and now i start the New lessons that are finishing in june.

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Something About Me

I'm an Italian girl and studying medicine and playing volleyball are my life. Volleyball is my passion, I started playing when I was 12 years old, and then I played for 4 years in a team which was 1 hour away from my home. It has been hard, but a great experience too: I won the Italian campionship and also participated in competitions outside Italy. I've met people who now are my best friends; we have shared very intense moments toghether and that has established a bond between us!

Last year I passed the entrance test for medicine school. That was my dream and I'm very happy and proud. Last week I passed my biochemistry exam and now I'm starting new classes that are finishing in June. :D

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Here are a few mistakes about words.

campionship,toghether.

 

As far as I know,Italian volleyball,especially women,always has been a championship strong contender of Olympic games.And there are lots of beautiful girl in them,^-^.

I havn't been Italian before,as we know,this country is very beautiful.there are many place i want to be.

Rome, Venice,Turin(Juventus is here,i like football...)

at last,great job....

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Something about me

I am an italian girl.  i study medicine and i play volleyball. Volleyball is a passion, i started when i was 12 years old, and then i played for 4 years on a team which has the gym. The gym is one hour distance from My home. It has been hard, but a great experience too.  i won the italian campionship and i also did competitions out of italy. I known people that now are My best friends. we have shared very intense moments toghether and that Bond us!

Last year i pass the admission

 test for medicine at the  university. That was My dream and i'm very happy and proud. Last week i passed My exam of biochemistry and now i start the New lessons that will finish in june.

 

Great job.   

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