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Essay 3 - HOUSE Before CYN,my family moved to a new house.It's very excited. My dear parents have cleaned the house before I back home. There is a pink curtain hang at the window in my room, and my bed is covered with a red bedsheet,a red quilt,a red pillow...It looks like that I'm going to marry. However I like these decoration,it makes me feel warm and happy.Thanks for my dear parents. In my country,many people strived,saved in a lifetime,just for a house.They want to have own house,they want to do something for their kids. In Shanghai City,the house prices is very high.Too many people are unable to buy a department,they only can rent a room,like me. Hope the situation will trun better in the future.

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Essay 3 - HOUSE

Before CYN,my family moved to a new house.It's was very excited exciting.
My dear parents have cleaned the house before I went/came back home.
There is a pink curtain hanging at  around the window in my room, and my bed is covered with a red bedsheet,a red quilt,a red pillow...It looks like that I'm going to get married marry.
However I like these decoration,it makes me feel warm and happy.Thanks for to my dear parents.

In my country,many people strived, and saved in for a lifetime,just for a house.They want to have their own house,they want to do something for their kids.
In Shanghai City,the house prices is are very high.Too many people are unable to buy a department an appartment,they only can only rent a room,like me.
Hope the situation will trun change for the better in the future.

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Essay 3 - HOUSE

Before CYN,my family moved to a new house. It's was very exciting.
My dear parents had cleaned the house before I came back home.

There is a pink curtain hanging around the window in my room, and my bed is covered with a red bedsheet and a red quilt, with a red pillow on it...It looks like that I'm getting/ going to get to married.
However Nonetheless, I like these decorations ,it they makes me feel warm and happy.Thanks to for my dear parents.

In my country, many people strived,saved for in a lifetime, just to own for a house.They want to have their own house- they want to do something for their kids children.
In Shanghai City, the price for houses prices is very high.Too many people are unable to buy an department appartment, they can only can rent a room- like myself.
I Hope the situation will trun be better in the future.

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